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Written by anthony neko macias, on 13-04-2011 08:25 Kill Bill - Volume 1
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The year is 2067 me collin zack and zen are on a giant spacship in spacecotans 597 people so one day it is just a regular mornin i'm sleeping then all the sudden the alarms go off and i get my shirt on grab my micro pad a micro pad is a little touch screen assistant that tells you were everthing is shows you your way around the ship so the the ship is being attacked by alien space ships alarms were going off so i ask the micro pad where the escape pods are he directs me i go there were supposed to go to the planet cripton but the laser miss directed me collin zack and zen the problem with earth is it is alien invaded and basicly destroyed so this is bad i get out of my pod and look for zack zen and collin i find then and we find weapons and armor and a car so we drive downtown and all the sudden the car flips and flys 25feet its a giant robot alien so i grab my plasma tanker a plasma tanker is a big green gun that shoots little tanks of plasma see when the little tanks of plasma hit impact they explode so i start shooting it after a couple rounds it dies so now we have to walk oh and we found out what the aliens want under the pacific ocean there is some kind of energy source and in newyork hidden by indeans 100s of years ago under newyork city that energy source comes in 6 diffrent parts and theres hidden lasers in 6 continents so there going to activate all of them and destroy earth same with all the planets except theres the planet critison so if we save earth that won't happen were in america all we need to to do is destroy the laser so we go but they beat us we wip out our weapons and start shooting like crazy i'm gonna try to throw a grernade in there so i run jump and tuhh i get kicked ahh i scream the kick broke my wrist ahh so i try one more time i run duck shoot and throw the grenade i always stunk at basket ball so and noo i miss then the leader comes i run ahh he goes to kick i jump he misses one more grenade i run shoot the leader in the face and throw i made it he tackes me into the machine his body covered most of the fire he died but every body thought i was to until i wake up we did it we saved earth yeeaahh!
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