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Written by Tommy Pettersen, on 27-01-2011 23:13 Kill Bill - Volume 1
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Alfred is a scientist who works in a secret undergrund lab where they try to find a natural explanation for what ghosts really are. After a long time they find the answer. they`re not ghosts at all but the same people that live on earth from a unstable parallel universe. in the lab they decide to build a machine that can transport people between the 2 universes, they also decide that Alfred shall be the first person to test the machine but they get problems with the machine during the testing which makes Alfred stuck in the parallel universe where everyone and everything is different from ours. he finds out that his wife is married to another man and his child doesn`t exist and he cant take it. suddently he gets an idea, the lab might exist in this universe too. but what if the Alfred from this universe works there and if not how is he going to get in? i know this is short but i have an amazing twist for the ending in mind.
Last update: 28-01-2011 09:13
Published in : Sci-fi

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Posted by ShowxOfxHands, on 09-02-2011 10:38, IP 98.160.244.224, Registered
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Really enjoyed this. Sounds as if it would have amazing potential if it were given a chance to make it big. :D
 
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Posted by mtx100, on 21-03-2011 16:45, IP 88.151.27.228, Registered
2. good work
Good idea, I would pay to see this movie
 
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Posted by Sketchyman, on 30-04-2011 02:54, IP 81.166.69.36, Registered
3. thank you
ok now im done with the script :) after 4 months of writing.  
thank you very much for your comments and ratings it has boosted my confidence alot and helped me getting the screenplay done
 
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Posted by billynash, on 19-05-2011 19:35, IP 81.166.69.36, Registered
4. NICE!
good work tommy :) very interesting plot
 
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Posted by joshupetersen, on 06-06-2011 19:05, IP 198.247.174.247, Registered
5. Cool
I'm a fan.
 
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