The Foreshadowing Stranger

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Posted by tinydancer_83, on 27-05-2009 23:49, IP 69.21.105.224, Registered
6. *thumbsup*
i can picture this one! my husband would sure like it too. keep it up man! :)
 
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Posted by Perry, on 28-05-2009 02:40, IP 82.212.11.194, Registered
7. Good
thatīs a really good idea 5 stars
 
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Posted by 1qazx, on 01-06-2009 22:38, IP 76.199.161.86, Registered
8. Amazing
This is a very sweet story. Not many ppl on this site are creative, they just make up a random, dumb story. But this one actully has a great plot. 5 stars. I LOVE it! :grin :grin
 
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Posted by jetski, on 16-07-2009 03:02, IP 68.190.254.86, Registered
9. THREE DAYS OF DARKNESS
interesting. don't leave it hanging. finish it.tell how the first guy was blown away.was it fire? ice? did he vibrate to death? did his head explode from sound waves? did his flesh melt off his body? other than this, I have no pointers.
 
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Posted by ideaman, on 08-08-2009 01:39, IP 68.29.93.121, Registered
10. Good concept
great story good concept
 
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