A boy around 21 enters a coffee shop in Washington DC and taking a seat he looks around.
The man sits around for hours until the coffee shop owner Randy feeling curious asks the boy his story.
The boy says his name is Lewis and staring at Randy he says
"You want to know my story? Pay close fucking attention."
The story flashes back four years too when Lewis was 17 and attending Lake Blue High school in New York.
Lewis is walking down the busy hallway during lunch with his best and only friend Dave Green.
Some older and more socially succesful teenagers deemed the cool kids by others of lower social standing, approach Dave and begin taunting and shoving him, Dave tries too walk away when the ringleader Bradley punches Dave in the face, Lewis attacks Bradley but is held back as Bradley's friends begin pushing Dave and verbally abusing him, taking Dave's inhaler they throw it over the railing, causing it too fall too the bottom floor from the fourth where Dave and Lewis are standing.
Dave begins coughing and choking and begins too black out upon which Lewis breaks free and drags Dave away from them trying too shake him awake.
Bradley and his friends leave but give Lewis a smile as they go on their way.
With them gone Lewis and Dave report the incident too the principal who dismisses it as nonsense, a biast view since the principal is close friends with Bradley's father.
Lewis lashes out verbally calling it bullshit, and Dave follows the angry Lewis out off the room.
The two off them take their seats at the cafeteria where Bradley begins shouting insults from afar.
One boy Seth notices as he is making his way too the reading room above the library at the front off the school, so as too revise for an upcoming Geometry test.
Seth a small yet foulmouthed red and brown haired boy stops and sits with them commenting that Bradley is a prick.
Seth invites the two off them too sit with his friends consisting off Quinn, Marcus, Bobby,Elisha, John, Matt, Greg and ladies man Vin.
The group kindly take Dave and Lewis in, treating them like true friends.
Dave has an immediate sexual reaction too Quinn a beatiful blonde who takes nicely too Dave.
As the weeks pass by Dave and Lewis grow more popular mostly thanks too Dave who while in Art class drew a picture off a beatiful girl in his class, and her spotting this, found it flattering and reacted nicely too him, suggesting too the teacher that it be posted outside in the hallway (art corridor.)
Many popular teenagers take kindly too what Dave had done, all except Bradley......
One off Dave's friends Greg has sex with Bradleys girlfriend April and is caught in the act by Bradley who attacks Greg and tries too kill him.
Greg runs out off the house without a second thought and in a fit off extreme anger Bradley punches April very hard in the face and storming out off Aprils house he launches a vendetta against Greg and his friends online on FaceBook.
On monday at school Bradley takes his anger out on Dave taunting him in the hallways again.
Lewis catches him and tries too intervene but a teacher catches this happening and Bradley is suspended.
One of Dave and Lewis' friends John having seen Lewis' immense anger and power invites Lewis too his apartment on the same night.
Lewis, arriving at the apartment finds that Greg,Marcus, and Matt along with John are waiting.
John shows them all a wall in his bedroom upon which John has set out schematics for a robbery which he is planning.
John informs them, that he needs their help too carry out the robbery and that he has the whole plan figured out and informs them it is a one time thing.
Marcus and Matt agree too go along with it but Lewis and Greg deny and after a lot off persuading they reluctantly agree too take part in the robbery.
John and his uncle Freddo show the four off them how the heist will go down.
The four off them are taken too arm training, showing them how too handle weapons.
It goes well and John proceeds too begin the heist.
The goup is planning too isolate an armoured truck carrying a huge amount off 500 hundred dollar bills.
The group begin work on the heist by posing as construction workers working on the road where the armoured truck is passing through.
They gain access too the sewers and plant C4 directly above where the armoured truck is supposed too stop.
The group on the day off the robbery detonate the C4 and the truck above C4 falls straight into the sewers where Lewis, Marcus and Matt load the money into their unmarked cars.
They begin too leave until a large group off police arrive shooting John's uncle dead.
John and Matt open fire on the police killing most off them.
Matt triggers the rest off the C4 (they only used half.)
And the explosion causes the squad cars too fall into the sewers and the police are killed except for one Detective. Wahlberg who manages too escape as the C4 goes off.
The group leave and head too different exit points but Wahlberg and his partner Ramirez begin chasing John who they spot in a subway station.
Wahlberg tries too cut John off but John escapes the station and using a detonation switch his uncle gave him incase off emergencies like this, he triggers it and the electricity across 10 miles is cut off and John begins running until Ramirez chases him into an office building where John escapes by jumping from a window and swinging onto the car park below by using a flag pole attached too the side off the building.
John escapes.
The group arrive at school the next day but Lewis and Marcus and Greg refuse too speak too John or Matt.
Bradley continues his bullying off Dave but while walking home one day with Greg, Dave spots Bradley following him with a few off his friends.
Bradley attacks Greg from behind and beats him too a pulp and trying too help Dave is too.
Greg tries too escape but he is kicked infront off an oncoming car.
Greg is killed and dies a bloody mess but Dave escapes and runs too Lewis' house where he sneaks into Lewis' bedroom and breaking down crying he hugs Lewis confessing everything and Lewis is lost for words comforting Dave.
Lewis lets him stay the night but during the night while Dave is asleep Lewis sneaks too one off Bradley's parties where he finds Bradley and hits him over the head with a golf club.
Lewis and Bradley begin fighting but after a huge fight in his house, Bradley takes his fathers gun and forces Lewis too leave firing a warning shot at the wall.
At school the next day Lewis tells Seth about Greg's death and Seth suggest that he tell the police but Lewis sighs and explains the robbery.
Seth is lost for words and he suggests they keep it secret.
Bradley beats Dave too tears in the hallway at school until Seth tells him too back off, Bradley simply laughs and hits Seth in the face, and while he is distracted, Dave grabs a girl's hockey stick lying agaisnt the wall too hit Bradley in the face with.
Bradley falls down bloody and he attacks Dave again until Lewis and one off Bradley's friends breaks it up.
Dave tells his guidance counselor and Dave and Bradley are reported too the principal and suspended.
While Dave is suspended Lewis promises him he will visit everyday until the suspension is over.
Lewis fails too do so when he grows attracted too Quinn and the two have sex at Quinn's house.
When Dave returns and finds that Lewis is going out with Quinn who he adores sexually, Dave punches Lewis in the face and beats him mercifully but Lewis doesn't have the heart too hurt his best friend.
Lewis is taken too hospital and because off this he misses Greg's funeral which Dave does not attend.
After getting Lewis sent too hospital, Dave's friends begin too reject him, including Quinn.
Seth takes pity on Dave who begins too sit alone at the canteen.
Seth encourages Dave too apologise but on his way too do so, Bradley grabs Dave and smashes his head off a table resulting in Dave crying.
Seth pushes Bradley away but he is thrown into a table which breaks under his weight.
Seth is unconscious and John and Matt defend Dave as do Marcus and Vin, and Bobby and Elisha, Quinn finally defends Dave but at this point Bradley is outnumbered and he leaves.
Quinn and Dave share a kiss but she leaves quickly just as Dave says he loves her.
John goes too the hospital with Matt, Marcus, and three off his friends Simon,Will and Kevin.
The group inform Lewis that they are planning another heist but Lewis' help is needed.
Lewis says he cant and won't, but John threatens Quinn's life and Lewis agrees but he demands that his share off the cash be upped in amount. John agrees.
The next day before the hesit as Lewis gets out off hospital he visits his father in prison and tells him everything that is going and his father suggests he goes for the cash again.
Lewis smiles and says "You're advise isn't the best dad is it?"
(Lewis' dad murdered a taxi driver.)
His dad says "Well atleast listen too this, fuck the robbery fuck the money things will only turn out bad, making a change aint so hard."
Lewis shouts at his father and says " What would you know about making a change, you just fucking let Mum, walk out, out off our lives for ever and you just sat and fucking drank your beer watching the fucking Baseball.
You making those shit decisions thats why You're in there and I'm out here!!!!!!!!!"
Lewis storms off and as his father goes back too his cell he cries silently as his son leaves.
John shows the new group, Simon,Will,Matt,Marcus,Kevin, and Lewis a plan he has devised in which they will pose as a team off armoured truck security guards.
The seven-person crew are dispatched as normal employees usually would, in two trucks to collect $42 million, or $7 million each, from the Federal Reserve, and after a radio check-in with their superiors the plan is set into motion by driving to an abandoned steel mill located in a radio dead-zone after pick up. Here the team begins to unload the money for storage, intending to collect the cash after the heat from the heist dies down.
The plan is compromised when a drunk cop in the abandoned steel mill finds out what they are doing.
John shoots the cop and Lewis shocked tries too help the man who is shot dead by Marcus who explains they had no choice.
Lewis upset over this barricades himself in the truck with the remaining 21 million.
After an attempt too flee in the truck fails Lewis sets off the alarm and a squad car near the steel mill watching for speeding cars notices and goes too investigate.
The two men in the squad car Wahlberg and Ramirez shifted down too traffic after their failure on the robbery incident, drive too the steel mill and notice Lewis signalling for help in the squad car. Ramirez goes too investigate and John remembering Ramirez, shoots him dead.
Wahlberg drives very fast towards the steel mill and smashing through a wall crashes into Kevin and he is crushed by the squad cars weight.
Marcus begins having second thoughts as Wahlberg is shot in the chest while exiting the car, shot by John.
Marcus, while the group is distracted tries too get help Lewis escape but John sneaking up on him stabs him too death.
Matt begins working on the armoured truck trying too knock the pins out of the door hinges, which will allow them to remove the doors and kill Lewis and take the money.
While the team is distracted Wahlberg regains consciousness and taking Kevin's submachine gun begins approaching the truck.
Wahlberg shoots John through the back and seriously injures Will by shooting him three times through the chest.
As the group open fire on Wahlberg who is hiding behind the squad car, Simon, Will's brother tries too remove the bullets so he can try and stitch up the wounds but Simon is shot dead by a stray bullet and Will bleeds too death.
Lewis finds that the floor off the truck has a removable panel and taking as much cash as he can carry in a duffel bag he takes a gun from the front seat and climbs out through the panell.
Lewis shoots Matt through the leg and kicks John too the ground and climbing in Wahlberg's squad car, Lewis begins too leave until he reverses back and drags the injured Wahlberg into the squad car.
Lewis begins driving towards the school where he informs Wahlberg too stay in the car.
Lewis takes the two duffel bags filled with his guns and money and puts them in Dave and his lockers.
Seth spots Lewis and asks him why he is covered in dirt and blood and wearing a security guard outfit.
Lewis drags Seth away and tells him too shut up about everything.
Vin, one off Lewis' friends is in the toilets where he injects himself with heroine and he sets up a noose preparing too hang himself.
Wahlberg enters the school and hides out in a toilet trying too stitch up his wounds but upon finding blood leading too a cubicle he follows the trail and stares inside where he finds the dead body
off the principal his throat having been cut repeatedly.
Wahlberg backs away.
Lewis and Seth find Elisha walking out off an art classroom and Seth tells her too follow them.
Out off curiousity Elisha follows them.
Bobby exits the reading room and heading for the toilets he finds a message written in blood on the wall.
The message reads "Hell."
Following the trail off blood Bobby looks in the toilets and finds the blood soaked body off Bradley's ex-girlfriend.
Bobby backs away in shock and runs out off the bathroom and he begins running down the hallway.
Bradley is standing against his locker a few students sitting around and far away from him, Bradley is hassling Quinn, and he feels her ass upon which she tries too shrug him off but he keeps a firm hold off her until he see's Dave walking down the hallway with his head down slightly,him with his hood up and Bradley smiles at him, saying "Where you been fatso?"
Dave smiles and rasing a gun he shoots Bradley too death and Quinn falls too the ground screaming.
Bobby having ran towards this slips as the gunshots are fired and he begins too back away until a huge amount off students burst out off their classrooms and knock Bobby too the side.
Dave shoots a random student and almost all off the school is evacuated except for Wahlberg, Dave,Quinn, Bobby,Elisha, Vin, Lewis, Seth six off Bradleys friends, two teachers and John and Matt who had entered the school moments ago.
Dave using a remote lock down switch belonging too the principal initiates Lockdown and the whole school is locked from the inside, every door.
Three off Bradleys friends Rich,Peter and Troy are sneaking along a hallway until the lights begin flickering on and off.
The lights stay off for a while but when they pop on again a shadowy figure is standing at the end off the corridor.
Rich goes too investiagte but the figure throws a knife straight at Rich and he is stabbed through the heart and he collapses dead.
Troy runs off, but Peter runs too help Rich but the figure raises a hatchet with a detachable blade and throws it at Peter, the blade wraps around his leg but the figure presses a button on the hatchet's handle.
Peter is dragged along the hallway where he is stabbed and strung up by his left leg with a cable from the hatchet (the button released the cable.) Peter is then stabbed in the throat.
Troy hearing the screaming begins running away and slips on some blood finding it leads too the geography department where a teacher has been crucified on a notice board.
Troy screams and begins running away entering the reading room and running too the stairs at the right side off the reading room, and running up too the fourth floor where the boiler room is, upon passing the boiler room he hears whimpering from inside.
He enters and begins walking along the steamy corridor with pipes all over the wall and steam pouring out off them.
Turning a corner and ascending the stairs into the boiler room, Troy finds the source off the whimpering, someone lying under a white blanket upon approaching it, the figure stops whimpering and begins laughing and blood stains appear on thw blanket, and Troy begins too back away.
The figure's hands are shown revealing a device, and upon clicking on the device blades shoots out and jumping at Troy the figure slashes Troy's throat in one swift movement.
Lewis,Seth,Elisha,a boy named Donny who is obsessed with movies and Vin begin walking along the hallway until Seth suggests they hide in the library.
They barricade the entrance from the boiler room too the reading room, and the entrance from the ground floor too the library, (closing off all entrances too the library.
The group hide out in the library which faces the car park and bus stop where, all the bus' are parked waiting.
Upon staring out though, Dave notices that News reporters lots off them and police, lots off them.
Outside the police begin organising how too rescue the people still inside, until the FBI arrive along with a Swat team, who stand waiting.
Night begins too fall and the FBI begin shining search lights at the school building.
Lewis suggests that they make their way too the lockers where the guns are.
Vin and Seth agree too accompany Lewis too the lockers.
The three off them get out off the library and Donny locks it as they leave.
The three off them begin running as quietly as they can too the lockers but they are shot at by John who had been following them.
Lewis raises the pistol he still had on him and shoots Dave through the stomach causing him too collapse.
Seizing the opportunity Seth and Vin and Lewis make it too the lockers taking the two duffle bags and running back too the library.
The three off them make it back safely.
Matt finds and helps John too his feet and the two off them go back too their hiding place in the toilets.
Bobby roaming the hallways runs too the PE section off the school and running into the gym hall he turns on the lights and begins running towards the gym store where inside he finds a PE teacher and three students.
Bobby grabs a golf club and advises them too stay here until the police comes for help.
Dave opens the gym store door and finds the lights off again.
He turns around too warn the students but Dave enters and shoots them all dead.
Bobby drops the golf club and climbs into the ventelation system where he begins crawling around until the air vent begins too break under his weight and it collapses falling from the roof and crashing into a wall high above the cafeteria.Bobby climbs out and begins walking up the vertically diagonal vent too the window at the top off the vent's highest point, the window leading too the art corridor.
Dave walking around with a loaded pistol finds the Vent and jumping onto it he confronts Bobby and the two begin fighting on the ledge but Dave raises a gun and shoots Bobby through the chest causing him too fall off the vent.
Climbing through the art window Dave enters an art class room where he finds two students trying too escape through the windows but he grabs one and kills her shooting the second causing her too fall too out off the window too the window too the ground below.
Wahlberg finds Bobby's dead body and taking his gun he roames the hallways and finding Matt he shoots him too death, when Matt raises a gun.
John appears and Wahlberg and him face off fist fighting but John is stabbed in his bullet wound and Wahlberg shoots John too death.
Wahlberg finds the library and begins begging Donny too let him in.
Lewis see's this and lets Wahlberg in and tends too his wounds.
Wahlberg informs Lewis that John and Matt and Bobby are dead.
Dave breaks into the reading room above the library and shoots Elisha in the chest from the balcony above,this killing her.
Lewis and Seth run too safety along with Quinn and Wahlberg but Vin taking one off Lewis' guns and opens fire on Dave and Vin is shot in the shouder and grabbing a pistol as he falls too the ground he shoots Dave in the chest aswell.
Vin who is suicidal stands up and says "Dave, I knew I was gonna die today, I just didn't expect it too be like this. So go on Dave shoot me..........shoot me!!!!!!!!!"
Dave shoots Vin through the head and Donny having fallen asleep finds the half dead Elisha and dragging her into the shadows she is brutally shot in the chest and legs by Dave from afar wielding a shotgun.
Dave grabs Donny and blasting open the large paned glass window with the gun he throws Donny out the window and he crashes into a large van denting it badly and killing him.
Dave finding Elisha barely alive explains too her that the school is rigged too explode and she is going too be the tester.
He sets off the bomb and the front half off the library begins too collapse falling downwards and the librarian in the vertical shift grabs hold off his desk but he falls out and is crushed by the collapsed half off the library.
Bit by biy the school begins exploding and as the police back away the parked bus' explode one by one.
Meanwhile in the school it is a fiery inferno and it is begginning too collapse.
Dave finds Quinn and confessing his love for her, he kills her silently and quickly.
Lewis seeing this attacks Dave who throws him away holding Lewis at gunpoint.
Lewis begins crying over Quinns death.
Dave stares at Lewis and says "Why me!! Why did they bully me!!!!!!!!! WHY!!!"
Lewis stands up in anger and says "Because you were the best off us!!!!! They wanted too prove that someone kind and nice like you could be turned into a monster like them!! Were all monsters all off us!!!!"
Dave grabs Lewis and takes him out a fire exit at gunpoint but they exit into carnage where there is fire everywhere with dead bodies littered all around.
Dave and Lewis enter a squad car and Dave sitting in the back aiming a gun at Lewis orders him too drive.
Lewis begins driving and as Wahlberg exits the school shooting at Dave, Dave opens the window and shoots him through the chest.
Lewis drives off and as they leave the school they find the few survivors mostly pupils and policemen standing at the side off the main road as Lewis drives past them Seth gathered in the crowd stares at Lewis in shock.
As they begin driving Lewis stops the car as a lone wolf passes by crossing the road.
Lewis drives on and begins insulting Dave picking up speed as he does so he deliberately crashes the car and it is flipped onto it's side.
Lewis lies bloody and dazed but Dave is dead in the back seat.
The police find and pick Lewis up, and that night Lewis finds out from Seth, that Dave framed everything on Bradley.
Lewis and Seth the sole survivors agree too keep what Dave did secret.
TWO YEARS LATER:
Having explained and cleared up everything with the police and keeping Dave's responsibility and Lewis' involvement in the robberys secret, Lewis and Seth have moved on with their lifes.
But Lewis recieves a phonecall and is invited too the grand re-opening of Lake Blue High School, where Dave is viewed as hero by the students who shunned and hated him while he was alive.
Lewis is angry but hides it when the new principal asks him too make a speech.
Lewis stands in-front off them all including Seth at the back off the crowd, the event on live television, Lewis stares at them and says:
"You're all fucking assholes, Dave Green isn't a hero, neither is Bradley, Bradley bullied Dave horribly and Dave's revenge was the Lake Blue massacre two years ago, I withheld this information from the police because I didn't want my best friend too look like an asshole after he died.
Dave was the nicest guy I have ever met and you people here, some off you the survivors off the Lake Blue massacre two years ago, you all hated Dave and you're hypocrites acting like he was your friend back then, like he is a hero, you all killed him, you all single handedly killed Dave Green, you all bullied him too the brink off insanity none off us are the heroes here, especially not Dave,Bradley.............or me.
Dave is a hero too me, Bradley deserved too die, plain and simple because he was an evil bastard, Bradley killed my friend Greg Crighton and I kept it secret because I wanted too keep my friend Dave from having too suffer the humilation off appearing in court.
Bullying is wrong, just like what Dave did was wrong and what Bradley did was wrong. After all the lies and secrets I've told and kept you can't call me a bad friend, or a good friend. Dave was the best friend I had ever had and I should have treated him better, and you're all assholes every last one.
Bullying, well those who stand by and watch this, are just as bad as those causing the pain, you all killed him.
That is the Case of Dave Green. Thank you."
David Bowie and Queen's "UNDER PRESSURE" will play as Lewis steps down from the stage as everyone around him gives him evil glances, one women slaps him and Lewis smiles at this pushing past everyone taking off his coat and throwing it at the angry mob, he walks past Seth who is the only person smiling.
Lewis waves at him and a voice over, a narration from Lewis says
" I used to think the worst thing in life was to end up all alone. It's not. The worst thing in life is ending up with people who make you feel all alone, that is my social standing. So in other words, I was fucked."
Lewis runs down the street shedding his clothes running down the streets naked his guilt gone.
He jumps into the air and the scene flashes too him diving into a swimming pool completely nude landing in the water as shocked parents, children and employees stare at him.
PRESENT DAY:
Lewis and Randy sit in the coffee shop and Lewis smiles at him saying nothing.
Lewis stares at Randy and Randy's employee Reed who are silent.
Lewis smiles and says " You know what I'll have a cofee.........."
Lewis smiles.
THE END BY LEWIS BELL AGE 14. PUT A LOT OFF WORK INTO THIS GIVE IT A READ. PLEASE.
Paul goes home and finds his wife, and daughter, brutally raped and murdered. He seeks revenge, and decides to use his Tebori tattooing skills to dispatch the criminals. He flies to Japan, to seek out his Tebori mentor Mikao. Mikao teaches Paul new ancient Japanese techniques, in order to carry out his Quest. He is taught to use ancient magic, and special formulated Tebori tattooing inks to dispatch the criminals, from inside their bodies. This happens when the Tebori tattoos are applied to the skin, and when the ancient rituals are completed, the tattoos come to 'life', and disappear under the criminals skin, to kill them from within. This turns out to be a agonizing death, and is almost undetectable from the authorities. Watch as the samurai, the foo dogs, Japanese serpents, and dragons appear in front of your eyes, and dissappear under the victims skin, to dispatch them from within. From my unpublished novel.
The scene is set in NYC with a few unusual disappearances of high end government officials which appear to be a serial killer with a motive.
The main role is played by a serial killer named Daniel who is known to be an innocent developed mentally disabled man who seems harmless un till one day, he gets up out of his chair and requests some clay at art class. Everyone is intrigued as to what Daniel will sculpt. To their dismay Daniel sculpts a simple bowl, but as months pass by Daniel's Sculpting ability is noted and he begins sculpting life size clay masterpieces with clear and real lifelike emotions on their face. With the local community taken by the realism in Daniel's Sculptures, a clear gifted talent. It is not long before the media publicise Daniel's efforts.
An anonymous donation for Daniel to fund his new found artistic side allows Daniel to sculpt as he pleases and even opens a gallery for his works. The large gallery is packed every night for a year. As eyes look on Daniel is quickly raised to international artist level with huge prices paid for his works and entry into his gallery.
As Daniel's fame increases so does the number of high end government officials, until on night a piece of the sculpture cracks away only to reveal a decomposing toe.
Daniel is nowhere to be found.
The Story begins with crime boss Thomas Devail speaking to a mysterious person, who shoots Thomas in the head after Thomas hands him an envelope. It was now an investigation of mysterious actions that left no evidence whatsoever but Detective Richard Hyde, had a clue that it may be the work of a contract killer the X killer, who carves an x mark inside his bullets.
The Devail Members were on a killing spree of many different gangs asking questions if any gangs hired the X killer, which was nothing more then rejection. Crime Boss Martin Delkin found his way home and later murdered from a struggling knife to his throat. It left madness for many gangs in New York City, betrayal occurred for the gang members who had no trust for themselves.
Detective Hyde has been spotted for targeting by the x killer but instead made an agreement of intrusion which Hyde Denied, then was strangled dead . Too much blood was raining said the words from Captain Marshal James, who took over the case himself after finding Hyde Murdered. During a street riot the x killer planned something out inside the devail's and Delkin's residence, so they returned and found a note that said X marks the spot, dead in the blink of an eye from a explosion.
The Captain searched the Hyde's car and found a envelope that slipped out of the X Killers pocket, which showed a list of every name Devail wanted dead including himself. The Bottom of the list showed Captain Marshal James name then instantly shot in the back of the head....
about young boy growing up to be a criminal. the reason why is cause of the way he was raised by hes father and hes hate that he saw comeing from him which made him turn into a killing machine killing for hes pleasure cause he did not know any other way till he finds a way through god to help him stop killing. i wrote alot more just a small taste of what am writeing atm for more info please contact me by email this is not the only movie idea ive been writeing ty
its called the iceman i have great ideas about it and more and more ideas keep coming about the movie i have in my mind and actors that can be in its really great ive been writeing it for while now
