This story starts off about a rich white girl who grew up in a very wealthy and prosperous family. she went to an ivy private school where she never realizes how diverse the world really is because she is shy, quiet, and always giving the people the cold shoulders. however, she did have one friend who was her cousin and always failed to make newer friends. upon graduation, her cousin later calls her to come visit her in the city for a week and persuades her that she needs to let loose and explore what is outside her walls at home. she says yes and flies into town where she meets her at the airport and she looks pregnant but it was a fake pillow thing just to play a prank. she meets her cousins boyfriend who is a Mexican guy. he is real nice and courteous and she is of course shy and just smiles and looks away. she looks around at the air port and sees all these people and she just zones out because she has never been in that awkward position for her and she couldn't handle it normally because she is weird and makes things complicated because of her character. well them 3 hang out for a few days and she has fun and is beginning to open up and enjoy life and all of a sudden, her cousins boyfriends gets a call and he has to leave for an emergency and her cousin had to go too with him. the girl suggest to stay for a few days to try and get use to it and enjoy it before she goes back and everybody agrees. well that night, she heard noises and decides to look and there was a break in. she gets scared and hides in the closet and sees 2 guys walking around looking for stuff talking in a hispanic accent. she looks and sees that fake pregnant pillow thing and puts it on. they find her after looking and she starts screaming and crying to leave her alone because she is pregnant. they settle down a bit and try to calm her, but the other robber notices something weird about her stomach and lashes out and grabs it exposing her lies. they look at each other and say to her that she messed up pretending she was pregnant and they both rape her and then leave her. her cousin comes to the hospital after their flight was suddenly canceled and she sees she is still crying despite only being gone for a few hours. she does her best to describe what they look like to the police but she just says there were mexican guys. her cousin walks in with her boyfriend and she gets frightened from seeing him. he notices and then asks to leave. they take her home and her parents were flying in the next morning to get her personally. however, she goes crazy that night thinking it was her cousins boyfriend without a thought. the whole night she plots to kill him and her cousin too if she gets in the way.
Read the first Behind the mask before you read this, or this wont make sense too you....... A teenager named Jesse and his sister Miya are driving back too their house in the town of oxton as they park their cars and go inside the house they find an envelope on the kitchen table opening it there is one sentence on it "Do you like scary movies?" Jesse tears it up and comments it is probably a prank, as the two sit down too watch TV they find out from the channel five news from a lead anchor correspondent Courteney Laidlaw that two teens have been brutally murdered. As Jesse says it was probably just a robbery gone wrong the phone rings. Picking it up, Miya is asked by the caller if she received the envelope, Miya becomes convinced that the caller is her friend Hughey, the caller basically reads her thoughts and comments "I'm not Hughey...." Miya begins too insult the caller but the caller remains calm, as Miya walks into her bedroom and sits down the caller then asks her how the movie was, she becomes convinced that it's just a sick joke, until the doorbell rings just as the caller says "prank?" Jesse lazily walks too the door and opens it, staring outside he see's no one there, he receives a text and staring at the message he see's that it reads "turn around." He does so and finds someone sitting on his porch deck chair, Jesse then realises it is his friend Hughey as he approaches he notices blood stains all over Hughey's clothes, as Hughey turns too face Jesse, Jesse realises that Hughey's throat is cut and his chest is covered in stab wounds. Hughey falls down dead on the decking. Jesse turns around and is face too face with somebody wearing a black mask and cloak, the masked figure stabs Jesse in the chest and kicks him over the porch railings. The masked figure enters the house, Miya hangs up the phone and hears the doorbell ring, she approaches the door and opening it finds Jesse covered in blood, Jesse collapses and Miya is attacked by the masked figure who stabs her in the stomach and drags her away. A drunk boy named Ted is walking along the street singing loudly he passes Jesse's house but walks backwards too face the house, noticing that someone is walking slowly towards him, Ted doesn't take it serious until the someone (Jesse.) collapses covered in stab wounds. Jesse drops a phone at his feet and picking it up Ted listens in too the phone and hears screaming. He approaches the house and at the front porch he finds Hughey's body, Ted backs away in shock. Miya is upstairs and the masked figure throws her body through a glass window and her dead body lands next too Ted who backs away. Ted begins too run away but he receives a text and looking at his phone the text says "Nothing personal." Turning around Ted is attacked by the masked figure who stabs him in the stomach and as Ted collapses the killer raises his knife as Ted screams. (OPENING TITLE SEQUENCE WILL ROLE.) Tim Davis is walking towards the Oxton DVD store, where he meets up with his friends Matheson and Terry, (after the events of behind the mask, Tim has became an engineer at a small garage in Oxton while Hayden has gone too Oxton University.) At the DVD store owned by Tim's friend Matheson, Tim's friend Terry approaches him. Terry explains that four teens were murdered last night, Tim dismisses it as a joke until he see's it on the news. The news reporter Courteney Laidlaw a survivor of the events in Behind the mask, is a lead news reporter and she explains too the viewers that a masked person has killed four innocent teens. Tim believes it may be a copycat killer, while Terry is shocked because he knows if he is a friend of Tim, he may be a target. Terry leaves the store in a rush as two teen girls named Holly and Liz enter, the two begin chatting about the murders while Matheson approaches Tim and explains it was a probably just a random murder. Tim is not convinced. Terry runs from the videostore heading too a coffee shop where his friend Randy works, Randy a movie buff, explains too Terry that it is a copycat killer who is trying too pattern his kills after the original deaths. He explains that it means things wont go down well for Terry as he is the equivalent off Marty from the events in Behind the mask, and Marty didn't end well. Randy explains that he is probably the equivalent off Robbie from the events in Behind the Mask, Randy explains that people who survived the first massacre are probably targets. The sherrif John Laidlaw overhears the two and approaches them, John begins making enquiries into what they are talking about. Randy explains that people are going too die soon, Randy then points out that Hayden and her friends are probably targets too, he then goes on too say that if she has a next door neighbour, he or she will not end well as they will be the equivalent off Lewis from the Behind the mask. It is late at night. Tim is walking home when he is suddenly swamped by cameramen and reporters. He hides in the DVD store where Matheson locks the doors. The two sit in Matheson's office and begin too discuss the murders but Tim quickly changes the subject. Matheson goes too get Tim a beer and as he approaches the fridge in the back he hears chuckling, Matheson switches on the lights in the front area of the store and finds someone standing there, chuckling, Matheson approaches the person who turns around and stabs him through the chest, the person stabs him once more and approaches the office and finds it empty, Tim is getting food out off the fridge and the masked man attacks Tim and throws him through the front window of the DVD store. Tim tries too run off but the masked man attacks him and Tim manages too kick the man onto the road where he is hit by an oncoming car, Hayden exits the car and hugs Tim but as the two turns too face the road they find the masked man gone, Tim enters the video store and finds Matheson barely alive, as John,Terry and Randy approach the group they find Matheson being driven away in an ambulance. Randy explains that Matheson is the equivalent of Clark from Behind the Mask. Tim goes too Terry's house staying over, while Hayden goes back to the university upon arrival she finds the campus filled with Reporters and Cameramen. Hayden enters her bedroom and meets her room mate Bella, the two begin watching the TV when the door bell rings,the ringer outside is a tallish boy wearing glasses and he explains that he is their next door neighbour who lives across the hall, he introduces himself as Luis. Hayden dismisses the name as coincidence and the two get along they invite him inside for coffee and he begins too explain that there is reporters everywhere, Hayden expresses her anger about this, and Luis explains he should head too his room and meet his room mate. Luis opens the door too leave and he is frightened by a New Reporter Courteney, Luis explains he loves her show before he leaves and enters his room. Courteney asks Hayden if she can have a brief chat, Hayden agrees and the two begin talking but Hayden refuses too comment on the events, Courteney asks her for one more question and she asks Hayden "Who do you think the killer is?" Hayden closes her door on Courteney who leaves with her cameraman. Luis meets his room-mate Josh who is a movie buff and expert on horror movies, Josh explains that if Luis sticks with him they'll get through. Matheson wakes up calmly and finds himself in a large hospital room with armed guards inside the room and outside. John enters and explains too Matheson that they have too keep him safe, because he may be a target, but when Matheson says too him "What if I'm not a Target, what if I'm a distraction?" John shouts "Shit!" and he and a fellow police officer Elliot depart for Tim's house. Holly and Liz are at Liz's house while her parents are away out for dinner, the two begin watching a horror film when the phone rings. When they answer it the caller begins asking them what they are doing and who they are. Liz hangs up the phone and as the phone continously rings they unplug the receiver and take out the batteries on the phone. Holly gets a call on her mobile and answering it the caller then begins too make threats when Holly doesn't take him seriously, Liz begins too suspect that the caller is their friend Jerry. Holly insults the caller who tells her too look at the front door, Holly approaches it and finds an envelope lying below her mailbox, Holly opens the envelope and finds a picture off a bloody and gagged Jerry. She screams and the caller tells her too turn on the porch lights. She does and outside she see's Jerry gagged and bloody tied too a wooden pole, (the pole has a double which supports the porchs roof also.) Holly begs the caller too let Jerry go because they are very close, and the caller after this comment begins quizing Holly on Jerry's background, as Holly gets the questions wrong, a masked figure approaches Jerry and cuts his arm, as Holly gets the final question wrong Jerry is stabbed in the throat. Liz unaware of the situation approaches the front door commenting "Jerry texted me, he's here..." Holly begins screaming no, but Liz opens the door where the masked man grabs her and stabs her in the chest and face repeatedly. Liz collapses dead and as Holly begins running away towards the main road she is nearly hit by a patrolling squad car, which crashes into a parked van, the masked man stabs Jerry too death and kills both police officers easily, and Holly taking one off the police mans guns begins shooting randomly across her garden but the masked man appears behind her and shoots her in the back off the head, the killer runs off. John arrives at Tim's and opening the door he finds Terry and Tim in the livng room watching a movie, Tim receives a text and opening it he finds he has been sent a picture, the picture being one of Jerry, Liz and Holly's dead bodys. Terry receives a text with a picture off the dead cop's. The phone rings and Tim signals for everyone too be quiet as he switches it too speaker. The killer is the caller and he says "nice too hear your voice again Tim, poor little Holly and Liz innocent little girls it may seem but it's your fault their dead, your friends are next, you can't save them all you can do is watch, it's time for the second act, you're gonna' love this one, because all off you have such big parts, the idiotic Cop, his stupid partner, the possibly retarded best friend and Hayden, she's your soft spot isn't she Tim, she's a pretty one, nice old big tit's now Tim I've got too tell you, this is just a precaution try locking your fucking door every once and a while," Tim stares at the front door which is wide open. The caller continues saying "You're dead Tim, you're all dead, and poor old Matheson you only left four men watching the poor guy, well he isn't going too need watched anymore, and Tim, one last thing, I'm watching." The next day Tim, John,Terry, and Elliot head too the university too find Hayden. Upon arrival at the university John and Tim are swamped by reporters including Courteney who John has a ran at for being here. John and Courteney continue shouting at each other. Elliot,Terry and Tim leave heading too Hayden's room, they realise she isn't there and they bump into Luis, and his roomate Josh, who explain that Hayden went too the cafeteria. Terry gets lost in the college and bumps into Hayden who was leaving the cafeteria. Elliot gets a phone call from John, John explains that the people who called Liz and Holly the night before, their phone has been traced too the Canteen, Elliot takes out his gun and Tim follows him into the canteen where Elliot rings the number they traced, a phone begins too ring and running through the canteen they find the sound is coming from outside, they exit the canteen and find a backpack lying on the floor with a phone ringing inside. Hayden and Terry run into Luis who explains that some cops were looking for her. Hayden and Terry run too the canteen where they meet Tim and Elliot. The four off them go outside where they meet John and Courteney. Bella approaches Hayden and ask's her what is going on but Hayden says she is sorry as she follows Tim leaving Bella standing alone. Hayden and Tim sit in the campus park and begin too re-connect but they are interrupted by Terry who explains that Matheson died a few hours ago after loss of blood in surgery. Tim begins too cry but Hayden comforts him, Terry and Elliot leave the campus and meet with Randy at the coffee shop, the three off them discuss how they are all third wheels too their group of friends, the three decide too solve the murders and find the killer, together. Tim stays over at the campus and Hayden and Tim begin too kiss, but Hayden leaves Tim suddenly and explains she has a boyfriend, Steve. Hayden leaves too go stay at his house for the night. Tim calls John, John takes Tim too his and Courteney's house and he stays there for the night. The next day Luis wakes and after getting dressed he finds that Hayden has left with her boyfriend Barry. Luis finds Josh and eats lunch with him, Bella and her friends Melissa, Daneille, Zara, Joe and Thomas. After lunch Josh has a period off chemistry where he is partnered with a beatiful popular and slightly dim girl named Amber, Amber is an aspiring photographer and after several mishaps on her laptop, she thinks she has deleted images from her photoshoot, Josh fixes her laptop though and gets her photos back. The bell rings and Josh is about too leave when Amber realises she is very attracted too the nerdy Josh, she follows him outside and kisses him but Josh says he cannot be with her because she hangs out with shallow people who think just because they are beatiful they are better than everyone else, Josh leaves Amber dumbfounded, but Amber finds him and admits her love for him in front of everyone at the canteen. Josh begins a relationship with her and the two begin going out and Amber is desperate too please Josh who she basically worships. Luis is at the library working on an essay with the help of Melissa, Daneille and Thomas as they are working they realise the library is basically abandoned. The librarys phone rings and answering it the killer begins taunting Thomas until he appears with a shotgun quickly executing Thomas, and Zara, Melissa is shot dead, and as Danielle and Luis make a run for it, Danielle is stabbed too death. Luis escapes barely and begins running off campus towards Hayden's boyfriends house where a party is going on. Tim calls his friend Ray at the Garage and asks Ray too pick up his phone for him and keep a hold of it. Ray hangs up the phone on Tim and he is attacked in the garage and eventually bludgeoned too death with a wrench. Terry, Randy and Elliot begin investigating the murders and find they are patterned over the original killings, they find that Jesse and Miya Green were the first too die representing Dave Green and Beth Green, and two other's were killed, the neighbour Ted representing Bob from the first Behind the Mask and Hughey representing Dianna from Behind the mask. The deaths of Matheson representing Clark from Behind the Mask and the deaths of Liz, Holly and Jerry representing, the deaths off Seth, Fiona and Lauren. Terry hears from Hayden there is a party at her boyfriends house so Terry suggests that he and Randy enter posing as guests while Elliot sneaks in, (the party usually being the conclusion of horror films.) Randy and Terry arrive meeting the guests Hayden, Bella, Steve and some of Steve's friends Marcus, Johnny, Leonard, Sheldon, Howard, Penny and BOB, Steve's next door neighbour. Terry and Randy begin looking for suspects and they begin too suspect Sheldon as he goes too the toilets a lot. Sheldon goes too the toilets and switching on the light he doesn't notice the masked man behind him, the man stabs him through the chest and cuts his throat exiting and closing the door behind him. Leonard begins drinking heavily explaining too Randy he has just been dumped, Leonard exits the house walking home but when he tries to cross the street he slips and falls on blood, he walks around and finds the source Sheldon's dead body, Leonard is stabbed and killed. Howard and Penny go upstairs too have sex and as they are about too begin they are interupted by BOB entering the room mistaking it for a toilet. He goes too the toilet. Howard and Penny have sex, and as Howard leaves Penny in the room closing the door behind him he goes too the toilet. Howard finds the toilet door locked, and he hears laughing he puts his head against the door and a knife plunges through the door and out the side off his head. Howard collapses on the floor dead, and the killer emerges (still wearing mask.) and he enters the bedroom killing Penny in one swift stroke off the knife. BOB downstairs gets thristy and drinks a whole litre off booze, he then proceeds upstairs too go too the toilet and as he finds Howard he is attacked by the killer who knocks him onto the roof. Bob tries fighting with the killer but he is eventually thrown straight off the house and he falls too his death. Inside Randy meets with Terry again and they narrow the suspect down too Marcus who they chase outside, and Marcus is stabbed by the killer who beats Randy severely and knocks Terry unconscious. The killer then attacks the approaching Elliot and mortally wounds him taking his gun and running off. Tim receives a phonecall at John's house from the killer who quizzes him on horror movies, the killer quickly changes the genre too action and quizzes Tim, but Tim finds John upstairs and the two are about too leave the house they are attacked by the killer who stabs Tim in the stomach and John is stabbed through the chest, Tim and the killer fight briefly. But Tim manges too escape taking Johns gun, outside Tim runs into Luis who is stabbed by the killer. The killer runs off as a police car stops too help, the cops rush too John's help. An ambulance arrives and rushes Luis and John away, but Tim with John's gun heads too Steve's house. Courteney in her news van arrives at Steves house and she enters acting like a surprise guest, outside her camerman is attacked and killed after a struggle with the killer. Inside Hayden prepares too leave until outside she finds the bloody and half dead Marcus who grumbles "Run..." before dieing. The killer bursts into the house and stabs Hayden in the stomach, and taking off his mask the killer reveals himself too be Randy, he explains too the injured Hayden,Steve and Johnny that he has been ridiculed all his life for being a movie buff, Randy explains that he wants too make his own movie, his own real life massacre, Randy taking out a gun shoots Steve dead, and fatally injures Johnny by shooting him in the stomach. As Johnny and Hayden quiver before Randy, Tim bursts in shooting Randy in the shoulder as the second killer knocks Tim too the ground and beats him with the but off Elliot's gun, the second killer then shoots Johnny in the head and takes her mask off revealing herself too be Bella. Bella explains that she was sick off all the attention Hayden was getting, so she set out too get some attention off her own with Randy, but when Tim questions Bella about why she and Randy killed Thomas and Danielle ETC, Bella says they had nothing too do with it. Tim is shocked and a knife wielding Courteney bursts in but Bella shoots her twice in the stomach. Bella and Randy explain that they are going too blame the whole thing on Hayden and Tim who lost control and grew insane seeking the intention craving it. Bella and Randy stab each other in soft non-lethal spots, and Tim is about too reach for John's gun until he is shot in the hand by Randy. There is an insane knocking on the door and as they open it and injured Terry rushes in un-aware of the situation until Bella shoots him. As Randy begins too stab Bella, he eventually stabs her too the point off death and kills her. Hayden attacks Randy and stabs him the side off the neck with a broken piece off glass, but Randy manages too stab Hayden in the thigh in and shoot Tim in the leg. Randy chases Hayden too the roof and as they fight the two fall off the roof onto a parked car and they begin too wrestle with each other until Hayden claws at Randy's wounds. As Randy prepares too stab Hayden, Tim appears and shoots him in the chest and he falls off the car. Hayden collapses at Tim's feet as the two hug, Terry exits the house mortally wounded and faints next too them. Police cars arrive in the fives and they all rush too assist the wounded, Hayden, Tim,Terry and a half dead Courteney. As Hayden and Tim finally kiss, Terry interrupts them and he is attacked by Randy who is shot in the head by a barely alive Elliot. TWO MONTHS LATER:
Elliot is alive and well.
John and Courteney are still alive and well, with their baby girl. Terry has taken over Matheson's DVD store abolishing the horror section. Tim and Hayden are going out. Luis is packing his bags and he is bidding farewell too Hayden who leaves with Tim too go too Tim's house as Luis bids goodbye too Josh, Josh explains that he and Amber killed Danielle, Mellissa,Zara,and Thomas, Luis is shocked and as he tries too leave Josh shoots him in the chest repeatedly and exits the campus as the police arrive. He hops in a car with Amber and they drive off. The two drive past Hayden and Tim nearly running them over, and Tim comments "They could have killed us." Hayden laughs a little and the two walk off. THE END BY LEWIS BELL AGE 15, WORKED HARD ON THIS, PLEASE COMMENT.
Dave Green is at home watching Knocked Up on the TV when he receives a phone call, he picks up the house phone and a caller not revealing his name, quize's Dave on what movies he likes. Dave hangs up on the caller, but when he sits back down again the phone rings, he answers it and the caller begins too quiz him on horror movies, when Dave's reaction is sarcastic and bored, the caller begins making threats, and Dave simply hangs up laughing. It is late at night and Dave begins too watch another movie and the phone rings again. It is the same caller and Dave begins too suspect his friend Seth is caller, but when the caller tells Dave too look out the window, Dave finds Seth hung upside down on a tree gagged and bloody. A figure wearing a black mask approaches Seth and begins too cut Seth's arm drawing blood, Seth begins too writhe and the masked figure disappears, Dave takes a knife from his kitchen and standing in a corner away from all windows he answers the phone as it rings again, the caller begins asking Dave too choose his Genre, Dave tells him too fuck off, when the caller aks about Dave's sister, Dave gets in a panic releasing that his sister Beth and her friend Dianna will be beack at the house any minute now as they are having a slumber party, As Dave gets in a panic and he answers a trivia question about action films wrong, Seth's dead body is thrown into the house window and as he smashes into the kitchen dead, the masked figure jumps through broken window and stabs Dave in the chest, Dave tries too stab the masked man but he is stabbed and gutted, his body is dragged through the broken window into the garden where he is hung from a tree upside down.
Beth and Dianna arrive via the front door, (Dave's body being in the back garden.) and as they enter the house they lock all the doors but as they find Seth's dead body, Dianna gets into a panic and runs from the house but her throat is slit by the masked man who runs into the house and chases Beth into the garage where she is cut across both legs and her back, as she tries too crawl away her back is crushed by the closing garage door and she is gutted and killed.
Dave waking hung upside down, half dead crawls into the house and makes his way upstairs too his fathers safe where he unlocks the safe and retrieves his fathers pistol, Dave spots the masked figure and trying too shoot him a shot is fired. Dave is then dragged into the garage and bludgeoned with a piece off wood.
A boy living across the road, taking the garbage out, hears the shot and as he see's the garage door open he runs towards it only too find Dave and Beth dead, the neighbouring boy is attacked by the killer and as he falls down he screams as the killer raises his knife, killing him.
"Opening title sequence will role."
The Next Day
Nick Becker wakes and gets dressed walking too school, as he nears the town centre, he is nearly knocked down by a girl who goes too his same high school, the girl Hayden apologises and begins too drive too school while on the way she picks up her friends Mary and Anna, they drive too school, and as they park and walk onto the high school grounds, two movie buffs, Collin and Terry watch them entering the school admiring their asses.
The two begin walking too the school's main entrance but they bump into two girls Lauren and Fiona who make their ways too their lockers discussing a horror movie they saw lastnight, they comment that they also saw Marty, Beth, and Dianna at the same film too. Terry buts into the conversation quizing them on how the movie was, they comment it was "cliched, drab,dull,gory and bad." Terry comments that most movies are. Nick Becker walks by them and meets up with his friends Clark and Marty, Marty begins telling them that Beth his girlfriend broke up with him lastnight after they saw a movie, together with Beth's friend, Dianna, Marty says that he went home straight afterwards. Nick and Clark comment "That bitch can drop dead for all we care."
Tim Davis wakes up and realises he is late for school, he quickly takes the trash out in his under wear and he notices, his next door neighbour Beth, has her garage smashed from the outside. He approaches it and finds the words "what's your favourite scary movie?" scrawled on the closed garage door in blood.
Tim finds the garage opener lying on the ground, he opens the garage door and finds Dave and Beth dead inside, along with the dead body off the neighbour who has been gutted, slashed and stabbed all over. He slips on their blood and becomes covered in it, he runs from the garage screaming and is hit by a patrolling police car as he runs onto the road.
He is taken too the hospital because of injuries from being hit by the car.
Terry while getting a drink at the hosptial where his brother works see's his classmate Tim getting dragged into the hospital by the police.
When both the doctors and the police question Tim about why his family hasn't picked him up yet, he states that his parents died when he was young and he lives with his friend Rennick. Rennick is called down too the hospital but Rennick is not allowed too see Tim as he undergoing mild surgery, the police suspicous about Tim's mother and father, run a blood test and find that Tim's mother is Sally Williams, who must have had an affair while with her husband, Sally is mother off Neve Williams, (Neve is a famous writer and she is best known for surviving the Lake Blue massacre when a classmate off her's brutally killed all off those in his english class as they all bullied him, Neve and Fred Moore being the only survivors.)
Sally Williams having passed away is obviously un-available so Neve is contacted by the hospital and Neve confused flies too the town off Oxton, upon arrival at the hospital Neve is told that Tim is her half brother, (Neve's mother had an affair.) and Neve is also told by the doctors that while Neve was recovering from the tension off the massacre, her mother gave birth too Tim, who was put up for adoption and adopted by Rennick. The police begin too investigate the house where Dave, Beth,Dianna and the neighbour were killed. Tim living on the same block, is put into the witness protection programme along with Neve who is staying at his house with Rennick.
At the police station a Deputy John.H Laidlaw is given the job off watching Neve Williams, John agrees too this but while he is preparing too leave his wife arrives at the station confronting him and explaining that she is pregnant with a baby girl.
John is overjoyed but he is called away too Neve's house with his Partner, Ross Dinkley.
John's wife Courteney arrives at the hospital and when she is just about too go too sleep she is attacked by the masked figure, she is chased around the hosptial but with the help off a porrly built medic the two manage too injure the masked figure with a knife from the kitchen, the killer attacks the Medic and kills him but Courteney uses a defribbliator too charge the killer with, the electric shockwave knocking him into an elevator.
Courteney is an aspiring and hopeful journalist and taking a knife from the hospital kitchen she makes it too a news van outside where the reporter is dead from knife wounds enacted by the killer. Courtneney then begins broadcasting with the help off a civilian acting as a cameraman, she manages too make a good story about how she was attacked by the killer.
John and his partner Ross are told too guard Neve Williams' house and make sure, both she and her half brother Tim are kept safe.
The police are told too watch the house 24/7.
Lauren and Fiona are at their house watching a horror movie, the movie being (SAW).
While watching it they receive a phonecall from an unknown number. The caller begins asking Lauren who picked up the phone how the movie is, but when Lauren asks the caller what movie it is, The caller replies "saw 1"
Lauren becomes scared and becomes extremely frightened after the caller asks her about the movie she saw at the cinema lastnight.
Fiona takes the phone and the caller begins asking her about the horror movie they saw lastnight and she comments "it was shit." The caller then asks her if "she likes scary movies."
Fiona after replying "yes." is quizzed on horror movies, and when she gets an answer wrong the door bell rings, when Fiona walks onto the porch too investigate she is frightened when the caller shouts "BOO!" into the phone.
Fiona goes back inside and locks the door, and returning too the living room, she can't find Lauren, Fiona is quizzed on the movie she saw lastnight but she doesn't know any of the answers, Fiona asks the caller if he was at the movie lastnight and suddenly Laurens body is smashed against the window repeatedly.
Lauren still alive and badly beaten is hung upside down on a tree in Fiona's backgarden, by a masked figure who quickly disappears.
Lauren begins trying too escape but she is unable too free herself from her gags.
Fiona is asked one final question "Where am I in the house?"
Fiona hangs up the phone and takes a knife from her kitchen.
The masked figure attacks her and stabs her too death.
The police arrive on the scene and free the badly beaten Lauren.
The masked figure escapes and Lauren is rushed too hospital.
The ambulance carrying Lauren inside has two policemen inside aswell as a driver and a paramedic.
A black van with the license plates taken off crashes straight into the ambulance knocking off the road. After several flips the ambulance rests on it's wheels smahed too bits.
The masked figure emerges from the van and opening the ambulance door is attacked by one off the policemen who was inside,the policeman tries too get his gun but the masked figure stabs him through the throat and kills the quivering paramedic, the driver and the other policemen are dead, the masked figure takes the policemens gun and shoots the half dead Lauren through the head.
As the masked figure begins too leave, the cop who had been stabbed in the throat whimpers "Why?" The masked figure simply shoots him and drives off.
Hayden,Mary and Anna are at Mary's house when they hear off Lauren and Fiona's death from Clark texting them.
Hayden receives a phone call but the caller simply begins giggling into the phone, Hayden hangs up and begins too watch the TV with Mary and Anna.
Clark is at his house when his phone rings the caller begins quizing him on the Nightmare on Elm Street but as Clark continously gets the questions wrong his doorbell rings.
Clark goes downstairs and looks through the peephole in his door, the masked figure appears at the front door and stabs a knife through the door. The knife stabs Clark in head and as he stumbles back wards, the masked figure enters and throws Clark of his own balcony killing him.
Marty is staying over at Nick's house and the two begin watching The hills have eyes but eventually get bored of it, their doorbell rings but when Marty answers it, no one is there, Nick is watching the TV and as he switches it off, he see's the masked figure in the reflection off the TV. Nick spins around but he is slashed across the chest and he crashes into a glass table. Marty runs towards the killer but he is stabbed in the leg and his head is smashed against the TV, Nick's parents rush downstairs and find the masked figure gone.
An ambulance arrives and rushes them both too hospital.
Hayden, Mary and Anna arrive at school the next day, only then, hearing off Clark, Lauren, and Fiona's deaths.
Collin and Terry bring Mary,Anna and Hayden along with Nick and Marty who had arrived at school later than everyone else due too their injuries, too an empty english class. Collin and Terry explain that there is a killer on the loose and that everyone has too be careful, they make ground rules explaining that people "DONT OPEN THE DOOR, DONT ANSWER THE PHONE AND LOCK YOUR DOORS, DONT LEAVE THE HOUSE, DONT DRINK, AND DONT EVER GO TO PROM" when there is a killer on the loose.
Hayden and Mary agree not too go to prom. As do Collin,Terry, Marty and Nick.
Collin begins explaining that everyone on Dave Green's street is being targeted for the murders. As almost everyone on that street has died, (Fiona,Lauren,Dave,Beth,Dianna,and Dave's neighbour Bob.) Collin explains that classes are sometimes chosen by the streets people live on, he explains that the people dead were all in the same english class, Terry then buts in and says "the people in the english class are the targets, and if you all haven't noticed, were all in that english class, that means somebody in our english class is the killer."
Anna calls it bullshit and leaves, she meets up with her friends Jason,Billy,Jamie,Darryl,Georgia and Megan. The seven off them leave school bunking off, going too Jason's house while his parents are away. They all begin discussing prom and they all decide they are going. (the seven off them also in the english class.)
That night Jamie,Billy,Darryl,Jason,Georgia,Megan and Anna head too prom with all the other teenagers.
Collin,Terry,Hayden,Mary,Nick and Marty head too Hayden's house too watch a movie.
Hayden with her parents away for the weekend, on their anniversary , let Hayden stay at the house alone,(she has friends over.) The group begin watching horror movies.
At prom Jamie see's his girilfriend but she harshly dumps him and leaves. Jamie leaves the prom and heads for Hayden's house. The masked figure at the prom, kills Megan while she is in the bathroom and the masked figure makes his way too the boiler room, where he smashes the water transport system, the masked figure causes an explosion in the boiler room which sets off the sprinklers in the main hall where the prom is going on. The explosion causes the stage where a band is performing too collapse and the metal pillars above with lights attached collapse and kill Darryl, one off the metal pillars collapses but stays suspended over the hall floor where the water and the electricity are mixing causing teens alll over the place too be electrified. The band are all killed, and Jason manages too climb on top off the suspended pillar, teens follow what he is doing but as Georgia tries too jump on the pillar her dress becomes snagged on an electrical wire and she is brutally electrified too death. Anna makes it onto the pillar but when Billy tries he only manages too grab hold off the bottom off the pillar, when Jason tries too save him, Anna warns him off commenting "This thing will collapse and kill us both, if he gets on." Jason still tries too save Billy but Anna kicks Billy off the pillar and he lands hard on a metal pole and his arm is impaled he is quickly and suddenly killed when a section off the wall collapses and the water from the boiler room floods in and the sudden gush off water kills Billy and crushes and drowns him. Anna slips and falls and her dress snags on the pillar suspending her above the electrified water, she begins screaming for help but Jason leaves her, commenting "Fuck you!" Jason and a boy and girl on the pillar make their way onto the stage and out the fire exit. Anna's head and arms become submerged in the water and her face and arms are electrified and boiled and she catches fire dieing a brutal,bloody mess.
The boy and the girl quickly escape but Jason walks slowly out, the three off them the only survivors, the boy and the girl quickly run off into the distance but as Jason walks slowly away the masked figure stabs him in the stomach and cutting his throat leaves.
The two cops guarding Tim Davis' house are watching intently looking for anything unusual but as they see a masked figure run by one off them, Ross runs after him Ross is attacked and beaten but he manages too stab the killer and throw him into a row off hedges, Ross runs back too the other cop John who is waiting at the squad car, as Ross limps towards him he is stabbed through the back the blade piercing through his chest, the killer pulls the knife out and runs towards John who is trying too start the car, the car sppeds into life and drives off, the killer jumps and grabs hold off John being dragged along by the car. The killer stabs John in the shoulder and jumping away John crashes the squad car.
The killer regains his footing and begins walking towards the house.
Neve and Tim begin re-connecting as newly found brother and sister, are watching a movie Rennick realising that he might lose custody off Tim begins drinking heavily and walking up the stairs he relaises he may also lose a friend. Rennick is walking upstairs when he hears shuffling, he walks towards Tim's bedroom where the sound is coming from and he realises the door is locked, he puts his head against the door too listen more carefully, and a knife plunges through the door and the tip scrapes Rennicks head and stumbling away the killer attacks him and the two knock eachother into Rennicks room and Rennick manages too launch the killer out his bedroom window. When he stares out the window too look, he is grabbed and pulled out, he and the killer begin rolling along the roof, as Rennick is about too stand he is kicked harshly off the roof and he falls into his car, denting the windshield he tries hobbling away but the killer jumps off the roof and lands on him, the two both injured begin wrestling on the ground. John is backing up the car and as he reverses fastly towards Rennick and the killer, the killer kicks Rennick in the path of the fastly moving police car which smashes into him and crushes him between another car.
John steps out off the car and finds Rennick torn almost in two, the killer sneaks up on John and stabs him through the ribs, he falls down presumably dead.
The killer then rushes off.
Neve hears a phonecall and answering it she realises that the killer is calling, the caller begins asking her various questions about the movie Tim and her were watching, but when Neve answers wrong, the killer begins laughing and as she hears a car reversing she dismisses it for the movie Tim is watching, but suddenly a car plunges into the kitchen and knocks Neve too the floor.
The killer stabs Neve through the Elbow and Tim is un-aware off what is happening because off both his I-pod and the movie drowning out the sound.
Neve is stabbed through the stomach and dragged away, Tim begins too stand up and switching off his I-pod and hearing a creaking sound, he realises the front door is open standing infront off it facing away from the kitchen he turns and says "Do I smell Gas?" The Kitchen explodes in flames and a shockwave knocks Tim out the frontdoor as the house is engulfed in flames. Tim begins stumbling away and he finds the seriously wounded Neve tied too a chair on the middle off the road. Tim's phone rings and answering it, the caller(the killer) begins taunting him and then finally quizzes him on Neve's book, which Tim hasn't read. Tim answers all the questions wrong until the last question when the killer asks "What was her book called?" Tim answers "Behind the mask!" and the answer being correct, the killer hangs up, Tim begins running towards Neve until he hears shuffling, turning around Tim finds the killer holding John by the throat asking him too choose who lives and who dies. Tim begins too cry and break down and John begins using eye motions too signal too Tim that his gun is on the ground near Neve, Tim begins too cry even more and he chooses Neve, the killer stabs John through the chest and as John stumbles away, Tim dives for the gun and grabbing it he turns too face the killer who is gone, as Tim turns too Neve he finds her screaming, Tim see's a black van approaching driven by the killer and running towards Neve he dives into her and knocks her across the road as the van passes.
The two survive and they see John approaching he is whimpering for help and he falls down onto the road where he takes the gun Tim had and shoots the killer in the gut as he is exiting the black van and running away. The killler manages too escape, even with his wound. John slumps back staring at Tim commenting "Kill that Motherfucker...." An ambulance pulls up, trying too wake up the severely injured John, when the paramedic turns too Tim, he is gone. Tim begins running towards Hayden's house which is a long row of houses away.
Courteney with her success on the story about the attack at the hospital, has been appointed lead story correspondent for channel 5 news, driving her news van with her cameraman inside she drives into the killer, who opens the door and kills the cameraman, Courteney manages too drive off and she drives too Tim's house where she meets John being loaded into a stretcher, at this point she begins too go into labour.
At Haydens house Jamie arrives un-aware off any off the events.
Jamie enters the house smiling at Mary who is his ex-girlfriend, Hayden leaves the house briefly too take out the trash and she notices her neighbour Lewis doing the same.
She walks towards Lewis and asks him if he wants too come too her house too watch a movie, Lewis agrees happily and begins walking towards the house with Hayden.
Inside Mary and Jamie go upstairs where they admit their love for each other, the two then proceed too have sex, Terry begins drinking heavily and falls asleep on the kitchen table.
Nick and Marty begin criticising Lewis because he has never seen any horror movies, Lewis comments "I just dont like that shit, it's the same every time,it's dull,depressing and just plain boring, I mean who actually watches shit like that, I've watched Scream that's the only horror movie I've seen." Nick criticises it calling it bullshit stating "Oh if you're a virgin you live bla-bla-bla" Marty though, says it is a "classic."
Collin simply watches the movie as Hayden begins watching him, Collin notices and smiles a little, Hayden begins flirting with him, and at this point Marty laughs and walks onto the balcony facing Hayden's large garden.
The killer sneaks up behind Marty and throws him over the ledge but no one notices.
Marty crashes too the ground landing badly and he is killed when the killer stabs him repeatedly.
Nick walks upstairs too the bathroom and begins having a poo.
Mary and Jamie finish having sex and Mary comments "was she better than me, your girlfriend?" Jamie is about too answer when he hears a shuffling sound, Jamie goes out into the hallway too investigate and the killer attacks him, he dies protecting Mary as she makes it onto the roof. At this moment Nick emerges from the bathroom and is attacked by the killer who knocks him out onto the roof, but on his way, Nick manages too grab hold off a baseball bat, from the room. Mary manages too climb off the roof and begins trying too start a van parked in Hayden's driveway. Nick and the killer briefly fight until Nick is slashed across the chest and knocked onto the roof off the van, the van begins driving away but the killer jumps onto the roof and he and Nick wrestle, Nick is stabbed lightly in the shoulder, and Mary driving realises that the brakes dont work. Due too this, Mary tries too get her seatbelt off in a panic and Nick and the killer roll off the roof sliding onto the ground.
Mary crashes the car, and is launched through the windshield as she gets her seatbelt off at the last minute. Mary dies. Nick begins running towards the house but he is attacked by the killer who beats him severely with the back off the knife.
The killer leaves Nick and begins walking towards the house slipping inside.
Collin sitting next too Hayden begins too kiss her until Lewis interrupts saying "The movies over, can I shove on Knocked Up?, I love that movie."
Collin storms off because off being interrupted, and Lewis apologises too Hayden who shrugs it off, telling him to put on the movie.
The two begin watching the movie and Lewis comments "I like you Hayden it's nice too know I have one friend." Hayden smiles and kisses him on the cheek. Robbie wakes up saying "Me too, where is everybody?" The drunk Terry stumbles away and Lewis and Hayden continue watching the movie.
Terry stumbles out into the dark and he finds a baseball bat lying below the roof.
He picks it up and begins swinging it around jokingly, he is attacked by the killer who stabs him in the shoulder and slashes him across the chest. Terry is kicked into a fence and he smashes right through he begins retaliating with the killer swinging the baseball bat which catches the killer in the face.
Terry runs off but is stabbed in the back, and left for dead.
Lewis having heard screaming stands up and begins walking too the front door, where Collin bumps into him opening the door a bloody and tired looking Tim wielding John's pistol runs into the kitchen screaming that they are all targets. Lewis comments "I dont even know half you people." Collin tells Tim too calm down and he calmly takes Tim's gun and shoots him in the chest. As he turns the gun on Lewis he begins screaming "I'm a virgin! I'm a virgin! does that still work?"
Lewis is shot in the chest and launched over the couch into a glass table.
Hayden begins breaking down with tears screaming at Collin who simply smiles.
The masked figure enters taking off his mask, revealing himself too be Fred Moore who survived the Lake Blue massacre years ago along with Neve, Fred explains too Hayden that Neve was always in the spotlight, and never him, Fred laughs at Hayden commenting she only got caught in the middle off everything, it wasn't personal. Fred then begins explaining that finally he would be in the spotlight he would have his time, Fred then rants on about massacres which were made into movies, Fred then comments he could be on the big screen, he could be the star. When asked about a motive collin replies "That fucking english class, we all used too be friends when we started high school, then you all fucking ditched me, you left me with that fucking retard Terry, you call me a monster, me a freak, fucking look in the mirror were all monsters here!!!"
Hayden in shock begins weeping and Fred whimpers "I think I'm dieing Collin, that fucking cop shot me right in the gut, we've got too find Neve and kill her...."
Collin takes the pistol from the ground and says "It's not Neve that's gonna die...." Collin then shoots Fred through the head and taking Fred's knife throws it off the balcony.
Nick appears with Fred's gun aiming it at Collin who is shocked.
Nick comments "You're all fucking saints aren't you, the fucking idiot next door, the stupid blonde, thats you Hayden and the twat in the corner Tim, well despite their flaws their the survivors, we're gonna live, cause I'll tell you one thing, I am not gonna die in this shit hole!!"
Nick is shot in the back off the head by the female cop, Mona, entering, she smiles at Collin and stares at the quivering Hayden, "A lot off distractions isn't there, time for the main event..."
The female cop explains too Hayden lots off events when injured cops have been hailed as hero's they've even got promotions, the cop explains that she has had too suffer through the ridcule off being a small town cop, in the lowest rank, she then comments that she's sick off the town, off the town that torments her, and that when she met Collin and Fred she had the perfect opportunity too gain respect, the respect she deserved. She also goes onto say she wanted John for herself, and if she couldn't have him, no one could.
Collin explains "we're going too injure each other, we're gonna make it as if, Fred and Marty planned the whole thing, Marty wanting revenge on his ex-girlfriend, wanting revenge on his friends who ridiculed him. We're gonna be the innocent survivors, who were left for dead, by the evil Fred who wanted too kill Neve and her bloodline, thats Tim.. now come on cop lets do this..."
The cop stabs Collin in the side and in the shoulder and Collin does the same with the cop.
Wiping off the prints from the weapons Collin takes the gun and aims it at Hayden asking the cop too call for back up. When he receives no answer he turns too find the cop dead on the floor and Neve wielding the weapon that killed her.
Collin and Neve attack each other and just as Collin is about too shoot her a severely injured Terry attacks him but when Terry is stabbed in the arm by Collin he stumbles away and Collin mortally wounds him by shooting him in the ribs, the force off the bullet knocks Terry through a glass window. Hayden begins too run upstairs and finds the dead Jamie she makes her way onto the roof, and Collin seeing her from the balcony runs upstairs chasing after Hayden wielding a knife, Hayden stabs Collin on the roof with a piece off wood broken off from the balcony, she stabs him too the point off death but as he stumbles towards her Neve shoots him in the head and he is launched off the roof. DEAD.
Hayden and Neve making their way downstairs finding Tim and Lewis still but barely alive.
As they begin too exit the house Lewis is attacked by the female cop who was still alive and she stabs Lewis twice in the chest and as he stumbles away she shoots him twice but she is then shot by Terry approaching with Fred's gun.
Lewis falls too the ground as Hayden kneels next too him as he murmurs "You know..it's weird, I get killed by horror movies and I never even fucking watched any...."
Hayden stares at him and says "Everything's a movie Lewis, everything."
Lewis stares at her and replies "Life's a movie, Hayden, only you choose the genre."
She kisses him on the cheek as he dies.
The police arrive and Neve,Tim and Hayden and Terry are taken too hospital.
TWO MONTHS LATER:
Neve is going away on a book tour and saying goodbye too her brother Tim who lives with another foster family Neve departs.
John and Courteney have just had their baby girl who they have called Lindy.
Terry now working at a video store begins too write a book.
The film ends as Hayden and Tim sit down too watch a movie, Hayden aims the remote at the screen and presses play.
(screen goes black.)
CREDITS ROLL.
THE END. By LEWIS BELL AGE 15. Alright I know it's overlong but I worked hard on this atleast give it a read, or comment or both, thanks bye.
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A boy around 21 enters a coffee shop in Washington DC and taking a seat he looks around. The man sits around for hours until the coffee shop owner Randy feeling curious asks the boy his story. As the boy simply sits in silence the owner, Jack a 15 year old drug addled millionare living off his inheritage, comes by too listen in, he sits next too his friend and employee Reed, who are both listening too Randy and the boy. The boy says his name is Lewis and staring at Randy he says "You want to know my story? Pay close fucking attention." The story flashes back four years too when Lewis was 17 and attending Lake Blue High school in New York. Lewis is walking down the busy hallway during lunch with his best and only friend Dave Green. Some older and more socially succesful teenagers deemed the cool kids by others of lower social standing, approach Dave and begin taunting and shoving him, Dave tries too walk away when the ringleader Bradley punches Dave in the face, Lewis attacks Bradley but is held back as Bradley's friends begin pushing Dave and verbally abusing him, taking Dave's inhaler they throw it over the railing, causing it too fall too the bottom floor from the fourth where Dave and Lewis are standing. Dave begins coughing and choking and begins too black out upon which Lewis breaks free and drags Dave away from them trying too shake him awake. Bradley and his friends leave but give Lewis a smile as they go on their way. With them gone Lewis and Dave report the incident too the principal who dismisses it as nonsense, a biast view since the principal is close friends with Bradley's father. Lewis lashes out verbally calling it bullshit, and Dave follows the angry Lewis out off the room. The two off them take their seats at the cafeteria where Bradley begins shouting insults from afar. One boy Seth notices as he is making his way too the reading room above the library at the front off the school, so as too revise for an upcoming Geometry test. Seth a small yet foulmouthed red and brown haired boy stops and sits with them commenting that Bradley is a prick. Seth invites the two off them too sit with his friends consisting off Quinn, Marcus, Bobby,Elisha, John, Matt, Greg and ladies man Vin. The group kindly take Dave and Lewis in, treating them like true friends. Dave has an immediate sexual reaction too Quinn a beatiful blonde who takes nicely too Dave. As the weeks pass by Dave and Lewis grow more popular mostly thanks too Dave who while in Art class drew a picture off a beatiful girl in his class, and her spotting this, found it flattering and reacted nicely too him, suggesting too the teacher that it be posted outside in the hallway (art corridor.) Many popular teenagers take kindly too what Dave had done, all except Bradley...... One off Dave's friends Greg has sex with Bradleys girlfriend April and is caught in the act by Bradley who attacks Greg and tries too kill him. Greg runs out off the house without a second thought and in a fit off extreme anger Bradley punches April very hard in the face and storming out off Aprils house he launches a vendetta against Greg and his friends online on FaceBook. On monday at school Bradley takes his anger out on Dave taunting him in the hallways again. Lewis catches him and tries too intervene but a teacher catches this happening and Bradley is suspended. One of Dave and Lewis' friends John having seen Lewis' immense anger and power invites Lewis too his apartment on the same night. Lewis, arriving at the apartment finds that Greg,Marcus, and Matt along with John are waiting. John shows them all a wall in his bedroom upon which John has set out schematics for a robbery which he is planning. John informs them, that he needs their help too carry out the robbery and that he has the whole plan figured out and informs them it is a one time thing. Marcus and Matt agree too go along with it but Lewis and Greg deny and after a lot off persuading they reluctantly agree too take part in the robbery. John and his uncle Freddo show the four off them how the heist will go down. The four off them are taken too arm training, showing them how too handle weapons. It goes well and John proceeds too begin the heist. The goup is planning too isolate an armoured truck carrying a huge amount off 500 hundred dollar bills. The group begin work on the heist by posing as construction workers working on the road where the armoured truck is passing through. They gain access too the sewers and plant C4 directly above where the armoured truck is supposed too stop. The group on the day off the robbery detonate the C4 and the truck above C4 falls straight into the sewers where Lewis, Marcus and Matt load the money into their unmarked cars. They begin too leave until a large group off police arrive shooting John's uncle dead. John and Matt open fire on the police killing most off them. Matt triggers the rest off the C4 (they only used half.) And the explosion causes the squad cars too fall into the sewers and the police are killed except for one Detective. Wahlberg who manages too escape as the C4 goes off. The group leave and head too different exit points but Wahlberg and his partner Ramirez begin chasing John who they spot in a subway station. Wahlberg tries too cut John off but John escapes the station and using a detonation switch his uncle gave him incase off emergencies like this, he triggers it and the electricity across 10 miles is cut off and John begins running until Ramirez chases him into an office building where John escapes by jumping from a window and swinging onto the car park below by using a flag pole attached too the side off the building. John escapes. The group arrive at school the next day but Lewis and Marcus and Greg refuse too speak too John or Matt. With Lewis being busy over the past few weeks Dave begins too connect with Quinn but when he finds out she likes Lewis sexually he leaves but on his way home he spots a boy around 21 being severely beaten by a group of gange members, Dave jumps in too help the 21 year old but he is beaten too a pulp and the gang quickly leave. Dave wakes in a bed where across from him the 21 year old is snorting cocain, Dave questions who he is and the boy says his name is Dale, he mentions that he is a local drug lord who was beaten by the gang because of his success in the drug smuggling business. Dale says he rescued Dave because, he knows Dave is a good person but Dave says that he really isn't. Dale calls it bullshit and the two quickly become friends with Dale acting as a sort of shrink listening too Dave's problems day in and day out, and commenting on how too improve his bullying issues. One night Dave leaves Dale's large house where his drug operation is located in a large basement type facility, next too his house. One night the police raid the place and Dale's brother is shot dead, in a fit off anger Dale beats a seargeant half too death and making a run for it he is stabbed by a police man, all of his workers except his assisstant Tony are brutally killed by the police. Dale and Tony escape promptly but on their way out a lone policeman chases them down a busy street and Tony in front off the whole crowd pulls out a Tek 9 and shoots the policeman too death. Dale drags him away and the two take refuge at a penthouse apartment owned by Tony who deems it a safehouse. Greg at school continues his secret relationship with Gregs girlfriend who dumps Bradley. When Bradley confronts Greg, Greg acts cocky deeming Bradley unfit too date such a beatuiful girl. Bradley continues his bullying off Dave, taking his anger out on him, but while walking home one day with Greg, Dave spots Bradley following him with a few off his friends. Bradley attacks Greg from behind and beats him too a pulp and trying too help Dave is too. Greg tries too escape but he is kicked infront off an oncoming car. Greg is killed and dies a bloody mess but Dave escapes and runs too Lewis' house where he sneaks into Lewis' bedroom and breaking down crying he hugs Lewis confessing everything and Lewis is lost for words comforting Dave. Lewis lets him stay the night but during the night while Dave is asleep Lewis sneaks too one off Bradley's parties where he finds Bradley and hits him over the head with a baseball bat located in Bradleys house. Lewis and Bradley begin fighting but after a huge fight in his house, Bradley takes his fathers gun and forces Lewis too leave firing a warning shot at the wall. At school the next day Lewis tells Seth about Greg's death and Seth suggest that he tell the police but Lewis sighs and explains the robbery. Seth is lost for words, mostly because off the robbery and Greg's death but also because he was not asked too take part in the robbery, Seth suggests they keep it secret. Bradley beats Dave too tears in the hallway at school until Seth tells him too back off, Bradley simply laughs and hits Seth in the face, and while he is distracted, Dave grabs a girl's hockey stick lying agaisnt the wall too hit Bradley in the face with. Bradley falls down bloody and he attacks Dave again until Lewis and one off Bradley's friends breaks it up. Dave tells his guidance counselor and Dave and Bradley are reported too the principal and suspended. While Dave is suspended Lewis promises him he will visit everyday until the suspension is over. Lewis fails too do so when he grows attracted too Quinn and the two have sex at Quinn's house. When Dave returns and finds that Lewis is going out with Quinn who he adores sexually, Dave punches Lewis in the face and beats him mercifully but Lewis doesn't have the heart too hurt his best friend. Lewis is taken too hospital and because off this he misses Greg's funeral which Dave does not attend. After getting Lewis sent too hospital, Dave's friends begin too reject him, including Quinn. Seth takes pity on Dave who begins too sit alone at the canteen. Seth encourages Dave too apologise but on his way too do so, Bradley grabs Dave and smashes his head off a table resulting in Dave crying. Seth pushes Bradley away but he is thrown into a table which breaks under his weight. Dale having entered the school too meet Dave see's this happening and smashing Bradleys head off a wall he begins beating him mercilessly until several off Bradleys friends begin too attack him, Dale easily beats them all too the ground, and pulling out a revolver he presses it against Bradleys face giving him a warning. Seth is unconscious and John and Matt defend Dave as do Marcus and Vin, and Bobby and Elisha, Quinn finally defends Dave but at this point Bradley is outnumbered and he leaves. Quinn and Dave share a kiss but she leaves quickly just as Dave says he loves her. One boy having witnessed the whole event, named Ben finds his dad who is a police sergeant and informing his dad off the events his father checks out the school security cameras where he notices Dale who is a wanted felon. And Bens father realising that Dave may be close too Dale asks his son too get in close with Dave so as too find Dale's whereabouts. The police in on Bens fathers, whole operation send Ben deep undercover, Ben having taken several acting classes is excellent at going undercover. Ben and Dave after a while form a friendship and Ben bringing up the subject off Dale's appearance at the school is given a straight answer by Dave, and Dave feeling he can trust Ben invites him too Tony's apartment. But as Dave is on the way there he is jumped by a hoody who stabs him. Dave is rushed too hospital and Ben thinking he will meet Dave at Tony's apartment is prepared for his arrival and he is given a wire by the police and his father, he is given a gun aswell but upon entry in the apartment a static interruption on the polices radio signal gives a large, loud beeping noise and this sound immediately emmits from Bens wire, and Tony realising this breaks two off his fingers and when he is about too kill him, Dale arrives and gives Ben a warning too stay away from Dave and him. Dale and Tony realising their Location is comprimised move too a different safe house and Ben is taken too hospital. John goes too the hospital with Matt, Marcus, and three off his friends Simon,Will and Kevin. The group inform Lewis that they are planning another heist but Lewis' help is needed. Lewis says he cant and won't, but John threatens Quinn's life, and Dave's life and Lewis agrees but he demands that his share off the cash be upped in amount. John agrees. As Dave exits the hospital he is confronted by Bradleys girlfriend who states that Dave should run, she walks off, but as she leaves Bradley and his friends jump up on Dave and begin questioning him about what he was doing, talking too her, Dave says nothing but Bradley tells him too re-consider and tell the truth. Dave declines, and one off Bradleys friends sneaking up on Dave grabs him from behind and Bradley and his friends beat him nearly too death and as he lies in a heap outside the hospital Bradley unzips his trousers and pisses all over Dave. Bradley finding in Dave's wallet a picture off Dave's dead mother, takes it and tears it up in front him of him. They leave and as Dave lies in his own blood he smiles. The next day before the heist as Lewis gets out off hospital he visits his father in prison and tells him everything that is going on and his father suggests he goes for the cash again. Lewis smiles and says "You're advise isn't the best dad is it?" (Lewis' dad murdered a taxi driver.) His dad says "Well atleast listen too this, fuck the robbery fuck the money things will only turn out bad, making a change aint so hard. Do what you wanna do, just dont end up in here. Your mother would'nt want that and neither do I." Lewis shouts at his father and says " What would you know about making a change, you just fucking let Mum leave, she walked out, for all I knew I had no fucking parents, she was out off our lives for ever and you just sat and fucking drank your beer watching the fucking Baseball. You making those shit decisions thats why, you're in there, who the fuck are you too be telling me what too do, you're not out here you're not doing the job, You're in there and I'm out here!!!!!!!!!" Lewis storms off and as his father goes back too his cell he cries silently as his son leaves. But as he is about too go too sleep an abusive group off prisoners tap on the bars as they open the cell and beat Lewis' father too death. John shows the new group, Simon,Will,Matt,Marcus,Kevin, and Lewis a plan he has devised in which they will pose as a team off armoured truck security guards. The seven-person crew are dispatched as normal employees usually would, in two trucks to collect $42 million, or $7 million each, from the Federal Reserve, and after a radio check-in with their superiors the plan is set into motion by driving to an abandoned steel mill located in a radio dead-zone after pick up. Here the team begins to unload the money for storage, intending to collect the cash after the heat from the heist dies down. The plan is compromised when a drunk cop in the abandoned steel mill finds out what they are doing. John shoots the cop and Lewis shocked tries too help the man who is shot dead by Marcus who explains they had no choice. Lewis upset over this barricades himself in the truck with the remaining 21 million. After an attempt too flee in the truck fails Lewis sets off the alarm and a squad car near the steel mill watching for speeding cars notices and goes too investigate. The two men in the squad car Wahlberg and Ramirez shifted down too traffic after their failure on the robbery incident, drive too the steel mill and notice Lewis signalling for help in the squad car. Ramirez goes too investigate and John remembering Ramirez, shoots him dead. Wahlberg drives very fast towards the steel mill and smashing through a wall crashes into Kevin and he is crushed by the squad cars weight. Marcus begins having second thoughts as Wahlberg is shot in the chest while exiting the car, shot by John. Marcus, while the group is distracted tries too help Lewis escape but John sneaking up on him stabs him too death. Matt begins working on the armoured truck trying too knock the pins out of the door hinges, which will allow them to remove the doors and kill Lewis and take the money. While the team is distracted Wahlberg regains consciousness and taking Kevin's submachine gun begins approaching the truck. Wahlberg shoots John through the back and seriously injures Will by shooting him three times through the chest. As the group open fire on Wahlberg who is hiding behind the squad car, Simon, (Will's brother), tries too remove the bullets so he can try and stitch up the wounds but Simon is shot dead by a stray bullet and Will bleeds too death. Lewis finds that the floor off the truck has a removable panel and taking as much cash as he can carry in a duffel bag he takes a gun from the front seat and climbs out through the panell. Lewis shoots Matt through the leg and kicks John too the ground and taking another bag of guns, climbing in Wahlberg's squad car, Lewis begins too leave until he reverses back and drags the injured Wahlberg into the squad car. Lewis begins driving towards the school where he informs Wahlberg too stay in the car. Lewis takes the two duffel bags filled with his guns and money and puts them in Dave and his lockers. Seth spots Lewis and asks him why he is covered in dirt and blood and wearing a security guard outfit. Lewis drags Seth away and tells him too shut up about everything. Vin, one off Lewis' friends is in the toilets where he injects himself with heroine and he sets up a noose preparing too hang himself. Wahlberg enters the school and hides out in a toilet trying too stitch up his wounds but upon finding blood leading too a cubicle he follows the trail and stares inside where he finds the dead body off the principal his throat having been cut repeatedly. Wahlberg backs away. Lewis and Seth find Elisha walking out off an art classroom and Seth tells her too follow them. Out off curiousity Elisha follows them. Bobby exits the reading room and heading for the toilets he finds a message written in blood on the wall. The message reads "Hell." Following the trail off blood Bobby looks in the toilets and finds the blood soaked body off Bradley's ex-girlfriend. Bobby backs away in shock and runs out off the bathroom and he begins running down the hallway. Bradley is standing against his locker a few students sitting around and far away from him, Bradley is hassling Quinn, and he feels her ass upon which she tries too shrug him off but he keeps a firm hold off her until he see's Dave walking down the hallway with his head down slightly,him with his hood up and Bradley smiles at him, saying "Where you been fatso?" Dave smiles and rasing a gun he shoots Bradley too death and Quinn falls too the ground screaming. Bobby having ran towards this slips as the gunshots are fired and he begins too back away until a huge amount off students burst out off their classrooms and knock Bobby too the side. Dave shoots a random student and almost all off the school is evacuated except for Wahlberg, Dave,Quinn, Bobby,Elisha, Vin, Lewis, Seth six off Bradleys friends, two teachers and John and Matt who had entered the school moments ago. Dave using a remote lock down switch belonging too the principal initiates Lockdown and the whole school is locked from the inside, every door. Three off Bradleys friends Rich,Peter and Troy are sneaking along a hallway until the lights begin flickering on and off. The lights stay off for a while but when they pop on again a shadowy figure is standing at the end off the corridor. Rich goes too investiagte but the figure throws a knife straight at Rich and he is stabbed through the heart and he collapses dead. Troy runs off, but Peter runs too help Rich but the figure raises a hatchet with a detachable blade and throws it at Peter, the blade wraps around his leg but the figure presses a button on the hatchet's handle. Peter is dragged along the hallway where he is stabbed and strung up by his left leg with a cable from the hatchet (the button released the cable.) Peter is then stabbed in the throat. Troy hearing the screaming begins running away and slips on some blood finding it leads too the geography department where a teacher has been crucified on a notice board. Troy screams and begins running away entering the reading room and running too the stairs at the right side off the reading room, and running up too the fourth floor where the boiler room is, upon passing the boiler room he hears whimpering from inside. He enters and begins walking along the steamy corridor with pipes all over the wall and steam pouring out off them. Turning a corner and ascending the stairs into the boiler room, Troy finds the source off the whimpering, someone lying under a white blanket upon approaching it, the figure stops whimpering and begins laughing and blood stains appear on the blanket, and Troy begins too back away. The figure's hands are shown revealing a device, and upon clicking on the device blades shoots out and jumping at Troy the figure slashes Troy's throat in one swift movement. Lewis,Seth,Elisha,a boy named Donny who is obsessed with movies and Vin begin walking along the hallway until Seth suggests they hide in the library. They barricade the entrance from the boiler room too the reading room, and the entrance from the ground floor too the library, (closing off all entrances too the library. The group hide out in the library which faces the car park and bus stop where, all the bus' are parked waiting. Upon staring out though, Dave notices that News reporters lots off them and police, lots off them. Outside the police begin organising how too rescue the people still inside, until the FBI arrive along with a Swat team, who stand waiting. Night begins too fall and the FBI begin shining search lights at the school building. Lewis suggests that they make their way too the lockers where the guns are. Vin and Seth agree too accompany Lewis too the lockers. The three off them get out off the library and Donny locks it as they leave. The three off them begin running as quietly as they can too the lockers but they are shot at by John who had been following them. Lewis raises the pistol he still had on him and shoots Dave through the stomach causing him too collapse. Seizing the opportunity Seth and Vin and Lewis make it too the lockers taking the two duffle bags and running back too the library. The three off them make it back safely. Matt finds and helps John too his feet and the two off them go back too their hiding place in the toilets. Bobby roaming the hallways runs too the PE section off the school and running into the gym hall he turns on the lights and begins running towards the gym store where inside he finds a PE teacher and three students. Bobby grabs a golf club and advises them too stay here until the police comes for help. Bobby opens the gym store door and finds the lights off again. He turns around too warn the students but Dave enters and shoots them all dead. Bobby drops the golf club and climbs into the ventelation system where he begins crawling around until the air vent begins too break under his weight and it collapses falling from the roof and crashing into a wall high above the cafeteria.Bobby climbs out and begins walking up the vertically diagonal vent too the window at the top off the vent's highest point, the window leading too the art corridor. Dave walking around with a loaded pistol finds the Vent and jumping onto it he confronts Bobby and the two begin fighting on the ledge but Dave raises a gun and shoots Bobby through the shoulder causing him too jump off the vent, he lands hard on a table which collapses under his weight. Bobby begins running away and smashes a school window in the canteen too escape, as he is running away Dave sets off an explosion which destroyes a bridge outiside off the school, the bridge connecting the english and PE department. The bridge collapses killing a teacher who was running along it. Climbing through the art window Dave enters an art class room where he finds two students trying too escape through the windows but he grabs one and kills her shooting the second causing her too fall too out off the window too the window too the ground below. She crashes too the ground near Bobby who makes a run for it off the school grounds, he is hit by a car as he nears the car park, the car belonging too Dave's father. Bobby barely alive is taken too hospital. Wahlberg roames the hallways and finding Matt he shoots him too death, when Matt raises a gun. John appears and Wahlberg and him face off fist fighting but John is stabbed in his bullet wound and Wahlberg shoots John too death. Wahlberg finds the library and begins begging Donny too let him in. Lewis see's this and lets Wahlberg in and tends too his wounds. Wahlberg informs Lewis that John and Matt are dead. Dave breaks into the reading room above the library and shoots Elisha in the chest from the balcony above,this mortally wounding her. Lewis and Seth run too safety along with Quinn and Wahlberg but Vin taking one off Lewis' guns opens fire on Dave and Vin is shot in the shouder and grabbing a pistol as he falls too the ground he shoots Dave in the chest aswell. Vin who is suicidal stands up and says "Dave, I knew I was gonna die today, I just didn't expect it too be like this. So go on Dave shoot me..........shoot me!!!!!!!!!" Dave shoots Vin through the head and Donny having fallen asleep finds the half dead Elisha and dragging her into the shadows she is brutally shot in the chest and legs by Dave from afar wielding a shotgun. Dave grabs Donny and blasting open the large paned glass window with the gun he throws Donny out the window and he crashes into a large van denting it badly and killing him. Dave finding Elisha barely alive explains too her that the school is rigged too explode and she is going too be the tester. He sets off the bomb and the front half off the library begins too collapse falling downwards and the librarian in the vertical shift grabs hold off his desk but he falls out and is crushed by the collapsed half off the library. The school begins collapsing and a large section off it implodes on itself. A teacher in a last ditch attempt too kill Dave turns the gas on in a chemistry classroom, which when he lights a cigarette kills him and burns Dave face. In the school it is a fiery inferno and it is begginning too collapse. A section off the floor collapses and Dave finding Seth kicks him down the collapsed section which he slides down but, he is rocketed out off a window and he breaks his arm when he lands, and he begins too limp away. Dave finds Quinn and confessing his love for her, he kills her silently and quickly. Lewis seeing this attacks Dave who throws him away holding Lewis at gunpoint. Lewis begins crying over Quinns death. Dave stares at Lewis and says "Why me!! Why did they bully me!!!!!!!!! WHY!!!" Lewis stands up in anger and says "Because you were the best off us!!!!! They wanted too prove that someone kind and nice like you could be turned into a monster like them!! Were all monsters all off us!!!!" Dave grabs Lewis and takes him out a fire exit at gunpoint but they exit into carnage where there is fire everywhere with dead bodies littered all around. Dave and Lewis enter a squad car and Dave sitting in the back aiming a gun at Lewis orders him too drive. Lewis begins driving and as Wahlberg exits the school shooting at Dave, Dave opens the window and shoots him through the chest. Lewis drives off and as they leave the school they find the few survivors mostly pupils and policemen standing at the side off the main road as Lewis drives past them Seth gathered in the crowd stares at Lewis in shock. As they begin driving Lewis stops the car as a lone wolf passes by crossing the road. Lewis drives on and begins insulting Dave picking up speed as he does so he deliberately crashes the car and it is flipped onto it's side. Lewis lies bloody and dazed but Dave is barely alive in the back seat. Lewis lies on the ground but Dave runs off, Lewis quickly follows him and Dave begins running towards Dale's grubby safehouse apartment in downtown, when Dave is on his way there he finds Ben watching and photographing the aprtment, Dave knocks Ben too the ground and stabs him in the arm. Dave enters the safehouse and finding Tony's friend Terry, Dave and him briefly fight destroying the apartment but Terry manages too run away onto the roof where he hides holding a pistol. Dave finding Tony attacks him and Tony is shot through the chest repeatedly and launched out the window by Dave, and Tony lands on the sidewalk dead. Lewis reaches the apartment and finding a gun easily, he makes his way around the apartment, Dale wakes up shouting "You fucking CUNT!!" and he opens fire on Dave until he is thrown near the stairs where he runs onto the roof. Dave follows him and Lewis follows Dave, Ben waking in a daze takes a gun he finds in the aprtment and approaches the roof. Terry and Dale make a run for it and jump onto a nearby roof where they slide down the slanted metal sides but Terry is shot by Dave from afar and he slides all the way off only having a chance too grab hold off Dale, but Terry slips out off his grasp and falls too his death. Dale jumps onto a nearby roof 9 0r 10 feet high and he slides along another roof, jumping onto another, but Dave and Lewis follow, Dale is shot in the back and as he falls off the roof he fires away with his gun as he does so, one bullet catching Dave in the stomach, Lewis attacks Dave and the two wrestle on the roof, Ben makes his way onto the roof but as he nears Dave he is shot in the stomach, Bens father on the rooftop is shot dead, and Ben seeing this in a fit off anger runs at Dave and the two are knocked off the roof, but Dave manages too drag Lewis off too and Lewis lands safely on a mans stall where he is selling matresses this breaking his fall, but Dave and Ben are killed by their fall. TWO YEARS LATER: Lewis has sunk into a drug filled depression but after a chance encounter with Seth, Lewis is inspired too write a book on the events off the Lake Blue Massacre. Lewis writes a book about it with some effort but when he publishes it, it becomes a hit, but he is really profiting off his best friends death. Lewis is treated as a hero by the public while in his book, Lewis made little reference too other survivors such as Seth and Bobby. While at a book signing in Vegas, Lewis meets a beatiful woman who he sleeps with quickly but after this, he wakes too find he has been drugged and robbed, his credit cards are missing and when he wakes he finds a smiling Seth sitting across from him, Seth explains that he got the woman too transfer the money from Lewis' accounts, into Seth's, Seth ineveitably profiting off Lewis riches, Seth tells Lewis that before the Lake Blue massacre, Dave had told Seth he was pulling off a con. Lewis angry attacks Seth and knocks him out, leaving he makes a speech on live TV at the today show in the LA, where he says "You're all fucking assholes, so am I, Dave wasn't a hero, not in your eyes, any way, he was the nicest person I've ever known, he was bullied severely at school, because off a bastard named Bradley, Bradley deserved too die in my eyes, you are all shallow assholes especially those who escaped the school when the Lake Blue Massacre was taking place, you idiots cared more about Dave when he was dead, than when he was alive, when he was alive you all treated him like shit, I used too be anonymous, a non-entity in high school, but now I will be remembered for something, as the asshole, who profited off his friends death, fame and fortune isn't as funny as it sounds, when Dave died I was faced with the greatest tragedy and greatest opportunity off my life, I wrote this book, not only so I would be remembered but so Dave would too, I will be remembered I have been wrote down in history but I am gone, like history is gone, like Dave is long gone, and I want you all too know Dave had pulled off the perfect con, he had made me and him, remembered for something, maybe not what we wanted but for something, Seth is finally in the spotlight ambition can make any dream come true, so Seth I applaude you, and the rest off you go fuck yourselfs, Thank You." Lewis is chased from the today show by an angry mob but as he nears a main road he begins too scream with joy, his guilt finally lifted. Left with no money he travels the world, he makes something off himself, he goes looking for adventure and for himself. While travelling in New York he finds that Seth has wrote a book about his life, and he is suddenly in the spotlight. Lewis travels too washington DC where he arrives in the coffee shop. PRESENT DAY: Randy, Jack and Reed sit in silence as Lewis smiles, saying "You know what I'll have a coffee." THE END BY LEWIS BELL AGE 14. PUT A LOT OFF WORK INTO THIS GIVE IT A READ. PLEASE.
