Crime
FOUR.
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Written by lewis bell, on 04-07-2011 02:21
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Opening: Randy a coffee shop owner has taken over his dead colleagues role as manager, while Randy is making coffee two suited men enter and one of them goes to the toilet as a man wearing a leather jacket follows him. Matty James and Lewis Bell enter the coffee shop sitting down, Lewis goes to the toilet but doesn't come back out. One of the suited men emerges from the toilet and meets with the other suited man the two begin walking along and Matty standing up at the counter says Hi to Randy before ducking down as two customers raise their guns. ONE: Matty James is working at a coffee shop under the reign of his annoying boss Charles and his friend and co-worker Randy, Matty faces many troubles and dillemas the string of his troubles coming from the annoying teenage couple Ted and Sophie who are always in the coffee shop for which they describe it to be a haven for anorexic lovers. Matty wakes up on a tuesday and leaves his room and one man rushes past him, two suited men shortly follow. On that same tuesday Charles,who constantly bullies Matty, in a fit of anger fires Matty, Matty angry leaves the shop and goes home to find his apartment trashed with a dead body lying inside. Matty gets into a panic and takes refuge at the coffee shop when Charles tries to get Matty to leave and Matty technically a customer refuses so Charles punches him and leaves as he does so walking outside he is hit by a car which kills him, Charles dieing a bloody mess. Matty goes to his apartment and cleaning it up and taking the body he disposes of it at a river where two men are standing and chatting at a nearby beach where a balcony overlooks it. Matty thinks they saw him and drives off crashing into a biker, who alive but hurt hobbles off. Matty several weeks later is working at a videostore with his friend and co-worker Lewis a movie buff, the two begin discussing how people in horror movies (characters) are very stupid. While there they see Jimmy Smitts enter with two men Marco Tarantino and Paul Wright who begin discussing bank robberies. Lewis and Matty listen in and this leads them to argue about whether Pulp Fiction was good or not. Jimmy Smitts a regular customer at the videostore is found dead. Lewis and Matty are driving to a coffee shop when they hit a man in their car by accident and drive off in a panic. And Lewis and Matty go to the coffee shop to discuss his murder, Matty upon entering the coffee shop sits with Lewis and the two begin discussing movies. Lewis goes to the toilet and Matty drinking his coffee stands up to get a muffin but he bumps into two suited men who walk past him. As Matty sits down two customers stand up yelling and raise their guns and the two suited men back away. The two customers aim their guns telling everyone to get down. TWO: Johnny Jackson and Timothy Craig, two hitmen/adoring husbands are driving along where they begin discussing Inception and Jackson gets into a fit about how it confused him. Timothy says it made perfect sense and the two get into an argument in which they nearly hit a man, Charles, who is walking to a coffee shop. Jackson and Timothy arrive at an apartment block, entering the building they begin discussing what their plan of action is and Jackson simply describes it as "Catch him,Kill him,Bin him." Jackson and Timothy knocking on a door enter the apartment of Tommy "the gunslinger" Wallace. While in the apartment Timothy poses as a salesman while Jackson admires a painting. And Timothy straying off comments "You killed a good friend of mine, Julie Reese, you killed her in cold blood, she was a friend of both of us." Jackson raises a gun and forces Tommy to sit down aiming the gun at his head. Tommy sits and Jackson questions him about the killing. Tommy apologises repeatedly and Willis "Two shoes" Bridges entering the room is shot in the chest by Jackson who ruthlessly shoots Tommy in the crotch. Tommy is pulled to his feet and slammed against the painting where his brains are blown all over the painting by Jackson who shoots him. Jackson dusting himself off is hit over the head with a vase by the still alive Willis who runs off. Timothy chases after him. Willis wearing a leather jacket runs past Matty exiting his apartment. Jackson and Timothy follow as Matty walks away. After a brief fight, Jackson is knocked into Mattys apartment where Timothy shoots Jackson in the foot by accident. Willis jumps at Timothy who stabs him in the arm. Willis runs off though. Timothy and Jackson exit the apartment, and laying Jackson on the floor, Timothy gets Tommys body and throws it in Mattys apartment shooting up the place as he does so. He then cleans up Tommys apartment and throws some of Jacksons blood into Mattys apartment, which as Timothy calls it "frames the poor loser." Jackson and Timothy exit taking the painting. Jackson and Timothy panicking drive quickly along the road and Timothy suggests once this is all over they see a movie and Timothy suggesting a rom-com, is told "FUCK YOU, YOU SILLY FAGGOTY FUCK!!" By a panicked Jackson, who in this panic distracts Timothy who drives very fast into Charles killing him and causing his head to implode. Timothy screams as does Jackson as the car spins out of control smashing into another. TWO WEEKS LATER: Jackson and Timothy two weeks later are at a bar discussing why Hamburgers are called Hamburgers when a drunk man Jimmy Smitts holds up the bar and the bartender reaching for a gun is shot dead. Jackson shoots the man through the side of the head and two shocked customers run off, Jackson and Timothy quickly leave as the police arrive and Jackson goes home to find his wife sleeping with another man. Jackson has a rant and leaves. Timothy reveals to Jackson that Tommy the man they killed, only killed his wife because she slept and murdered Tommys brother Reynold. Timothy comforts him and Jackson leaves. Jackson opening the apartment belonging to Marco Tarantino enters wielding a baseball bat shouting "You think you can just fuck my wife and walk away!!!!" The next day Timothy is at burgerking and two men wearing Burgerking masks enter and shoot up the place not killing anyone but simply taking the money from the register. Timothy taking his burger rushes outside, where he bumps into Jackson and tells him what happened as the police arrive. The two of them walk towards a coffee shop the following day and enter smiling commenting "this seems nice." THREE: Tommy the gunslinger Wallace is watching TV when he receives a call from a friend Jamie "Butterfingers" Bretter and the two of them and three friends, Mr.White,Mr.Dean and Mr. Weed, all go bowling and after a game in which White wins, Tommy is introduced too Julie Reese and the two instantly connect, and Julie gives Tommy her number. Tommy and Jamie are walking down the street and entering their car, a carjacker tries to kill Jamie, Jamie though takes the mans arm and neck and breaks them in the car door before shooting the man dead. Jamie is shot though by a patrolling policeman. And Tommy runs off. Tommy goes back to his apartment and rests but while playing the WII he falls out the window and is hanging on by his fingertips he falls though and Julie walking along the street manages to catch him and slow his fall and this thereby breaks her arm. Julie is taken to hospital and while there Tommy asks her out, on their first date they go to a fancy dinner then go to a 70's disco where they have a twist competition and then proceed to have sex at Tommys apartment. Tommy invites Julie to Jamies funeral saying she could accompany him there so the experience wouldn't be as depressing. Tommy at Jamie's funeral meets up with his little brother Freddo, and Freddo and Julie hit it off but while Tommy is at the toilet Freddo and Julie begin to flirt with each other. After the funeral Tommy asks if Julie wants to get a coffee but she comments she is seeing a movie with her friends Timothy and Jackson when she is actually going to a motel with Freddo, while at the hotel Freddo and Julie have sex and Freddo suggests they elope and abandon Tommy, Julie agrees but going into the kitchen takes a knife and stabs Freddo repeatedly in the gut and kisses him goodbye commenting "I love Tommy, I would never hurt him, I would never let anything come between us, but I just want you to know, I love you too." She then slits his throat and the door sligtly open, has Tommy behind it watching, he runs off though as Julie dusts herself off. The next night Tommy and Julie go to a movie where halfway through it, Tommy comments "I know what you did, and I've never loved you." Tommy then stands up and shoots her too death. Tommy goes home and the next morning while having breakfast Jackson and Timothy enter the apartment. As Tommy looks up. FOUR:While walking along a high street Marco Tarantino and Paul Wright begin discussing bank robberies and how they always go wrong, they discuss that Tarantino in pulp fiction came up with the best idea of how to rob a place, rob a restraunt! The two make a plan of how they will do this. The two while on a balcony overlooking a beach begin snorting cocaine and Wright mistaking Heroine for Cocaine and snuffing it has an overdose and he begins shouting, a man in the distance runs off and Tarantino revives Wright with an adrenaline needle. The two try to rob a bar but fail and rush into their cars and attempt to drive off but a car with Timothy and Jackson inside smashes into them and their car flips repeatedly. They exit the car and leave, going to a bar where they drink heavily and they notice Jimmy Smitts heavily drunk and Smitts in a fit of stupidity holds up the bar but he is shot dead by Jackson after killing someone. Tarantino while drunk at a bar goes home with a sexy women named Bella Jackson who he has sex with but he is interrupted when Jackson walks in screaming. As Jackson leaves Tarantino tries to continue with the sex but Bella attacks him and knocks him out a window where he falls onto a tree and to the ground, and as he walks onto the road he is hit by a car with Lewis and Matty inside. Tarantino and Wright plan to rob a burgerking wearing burgerking masks they do so, and accidently shoot a fat man in the leg which covers Tarantino in blood, the two run off with the money from the register. Tarantino with blood allover him goes home and rests, the same morning he finds Jackson storming into the apartment. Tarantino is battered by Jackson and Tarantino going onto the roof of the apartment building runs and jumps onto a slanted roof which he slides down and he is chased along a narrow alleyway by Jackson and after jumping over several fences, Jackson batters Tarantino who runs away escaping but as he takes refuge in a gun shop the owner recognises Tarantinos voice from the burgerking job and holds him hostage. Tarantino is tied up in the basement and he manages to text Wright who enters the gunshop and shooting the owner frees Tarantino. The two run off but are chased by the owner who is hit by a car. The two of them go to Wrights apartment and smoke weed before falling asleep. As they wake they go to a coffee shop and sitting down begin discussing the robbing of a restraunt idea which they hadn't tried yet, they smile at each other and stand up guns raised screaming curses. CONCLUSION: Lewis Bell and Matty James enter the coffee shop as they enter they see two suited men, they sit and discuss movies. Willis having survived the attacks upon his life by Timothy and Jackson enters the coffee shop and goes to the toilet upon entering he takes out his gun Jackson goes inside the toilet also and the two engage in a brutal fist fight resulting in Jackson drowning Willis in a sink. Lewis enters and see's the dead body and Jackson knocks him out easily. Jackson enters and meets with Timothy they are about to sit down when Tarantino and Wright jump up raising their guns, Matty saying Hi to Randy is kicked to the ground and Tarantino takes the money from the register while Wright takes personal possessions of reasonable worth of the customers, watches,money,jewellery ETC. Randy is about to reach for a gun he keeps under the counter but as he jumps up Tarantino slips and accidently shoots Randy in the chest. Jackson explains to Timothy how he was afraid of commitment which is why his wife cheated on him, Jackson stares at Timothy and says "I'm not scared anymore." Jackson jumps up raising his gun and Wright shoots him dead. Matty takes Randy's gun and aims it at Tarantino as does Timothy standing up with his gun, Timothy,Matty,Tarantino and Wright all engage in a mexican showdown aiming the guns at eachother, when Wright makes a threat against Matty, Timothy aims the gun at Wright saying "If you shoot him I'll shoot you." Lewis emerges from the bathroom telling them to calmdown but as they aim their guns at him he buts out. They all begin shouting at eachother and Wright shoots Matty resulting in Timothy shooting Wright resulting in Tarantino shooting Timothy who shoots Tarantino as he falls down dead. Lewis standing up the lone survivor of the eight shooters, gasping runs out of the shop. THE END. PLEASE COMMENT, WORKED HARD ON THIS.
Last update: 04-07-2011 02:21
Published in : Crime


leeds away
(6 votes)
 
License: by-nc-sa
Written by Lewis Keeping, on 29-06-2011 11:01
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forget green street the BCE (AFCBournemouth Firm) are in leeds town this game is everything to them win or lose
Last update: 29-06-2011 11:01
Published in : Crime


just left school
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Written by Lewis Keeping, on 29-06-2011 10:02
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a young man who gets in with the wrong crowed after leaving school an is finding it hard to find a job.he thinks the gang are there for him as hes finding it hard for a job, his mum keeps nagging him to find a job as she wants the best for him what will he do, what path will he take?
Last update: 29-06-2011 10:02
Published in : Crime


The Traffic Light
(7 votes)
 
License: by-nc-nd
Written by Joop Lagerwaard, on 14-06-2011 01:59
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At one of the hot nights in a big city, Sam, a security officer, walks thru the streets on his way home. When he almost arrived at one of many crossings, he heard other footsteps. Footsteps as if they made a big jump. Immediately after that, he sees someone in a jogging suite running by (from right to left). The person is unrecognisable because of the cap he (or she) is wearing. The runner doesn’t notice that Sam is nearby. Arrived on the corner, Sam shortly looks around, searching for the ‘stuff’ the runner could be jumping over, but Sam doesn’t find a thing. Sam looks in the far distant darkness and sees the jogger crossing the street, disappearing behind a corner. Again looking around vainly for an obstacle, he continues his way home. The next night. This time, way before the crossing, Sam sees the jogger running by at the same location. Sam steps behind one of the many poles on the street and sees the jogger suddenly turning. The jogger looks around, not knowing Sam is watching him, and than walks back behind the corner. Sam walks slowly to the crossing and before he arrives, he hides behind a commercial board. For Sam it sounds as if the jogger jumps from something and after that, he sees the jogger running by. This time, Sam waits until the jogger is out of his view and than inspects the corner better, he is the curious. Again, he finds nothing what appears to be an obstacle. He hears the traffic light switching to green light (for the pedestrians). He watches the pole (on which the traffic lights are fixed and thinks about the possibility that the jogger could have been climbing in this pole. He does not see any suspicious detail, but finds this very obscure. He walks home. The next day at noon, on the way to his job, he stops shortly at that traffic light. The lively crossing does not prevent him to take a look again. From the pavement he sees, just beneath the cap of the red light, a small shining slide. He wants to see if there is something on the backside of the traffic light, but because the pole is nearby the road, he has to walk on the road. He decides to wait until there is a green light for the pedestrians, so he can use the zebra crossing. And while he stands there, waiting, he survey the surroundings and so he sees the different kind of buildings. There are some small shops, supermarkets, a jeweller and a bank. There are many people waiting for the light. He than looks striking up to the shining slide, so striking, that someone beside him asks: “If you are on a hurry, you better walk by the tunnel.”, a suggestion for the subway. Sam looks disturbed to his neighbour, but says nothing. He waits until everyone uses the zebra crossing and than takes just one step on the road. His neighbour, a negro, noticed that Sam does not walk further but his full attention goes to the back of the traffic light, on which the negro turns and shouts: “Don’t you see the green light, man?” Lets call the negro for politeness ‘Pete’. Sam ignores Pete. He sees a pin coming out of the back of the red light, pointed almost diagonal at the crossing. Pete asks if he is deaf, to which Sam turns to him, looking at Pete and say: “You better walk by the tunnel.”, and than walks back on the pavement and walks on, to his work. Pete looks confused to Sam and than gets awake for the cars, who’s turn it is to get green light. At work, Sam looks via internet to the crossing. He noticed that the pin is almost directly pointed to the bank. To get his suspicion confirmed, he first makes his own investigation, before he says anything to the police. He leaves back home an hour earlier as normal. Arrived at the crossing, he first checks the surroundings; he doesn’t want someone else to see him. He climbs into the pole, pins up an apple on the pin and runs to the opposite side of the crossing. He hides behind a porch and waits for the jogger. Yes, the jogger arrives some time later. He also looks shortly around before he starts his nightly secret actions. The jogger climbs into the pole, opens the cap beneath the red light and removes a small object. After that, he puts another small object in it, closes the cap and jumps from the pole. But when he stands beside the pole and wants to run away, he recognised the big bump on the pin. He turns back and recognizes from the zebra crossing that there’s an apple on the pin. “What the fuck”, he shouts frustrated and climbs back into the pole. He removes the apple, throws it onto the crossing, rubs shortly over the pin, jumps from the pole and continues his jogging path. Sam gets more confirmation about his suspicion and , as an hobby, wants to irritate the jogger. If the jogger is out of view, Sam walks onto the crossing. He takes the greatest peace of the apple and pushes it again over the pin. The next day, on his free Saturday, Sam walks on the opposite site of that traffic light. He waits for the green light. If he crosses the road and approaches the lights, he sees that the apple is removed again. By that surprise, he stands there to long looking to the pole. When he comes on the opposite side, on the pavement, Pete speaks to him. “Hey man, enjoying your weekend too?” Surprised by Pete, Sam says: “Not any more” and looks pissed at Pete, as if he is undesirable disturbed. Sam waves shortly as if he wants something gone and than walks in the direction of his work. Pete signs as if he apologises and slowly follows Sam. After some yards, Sam walks into a supermarket, still followed by Pete. By the mirror windows, Sam had seen the trailing by Pete. Sam walks to the backside of the supermarket. On account of the connections with the security from the supermarket, he leaves by the backdoor and so loosing Pete. At home, with the necessary groceries from another supermarket, he makes contact with someone from the locals about the traffic lights. He asks if they want to check that specific light, with the excuse that the red light sometimes falls out. That check can be done, but earliest on Monday. On that Monday, the technician sees that the cap is open and there is a hole on the backside (the pin is gone). These details Sam gets on his phone by someone of the locals. He asks more about that light, but there nothing more they can tell him. Sam realizes that, in the last days, there could be a spy camera pointed at the bank. He is not sure that his interruption was a stop for some kind of bank robbery. Sam calls his boss and asks who works for him at the bank. He calls him (Jeff) at that bank and tells him what he has seen. Jeff asks him to come to the bank, but Sam explains him that the negro (Pete) could identify him if he’s nearby the bank. Sam proposes to get a lunch in a small restaurant, some blocks ahead. There, Sam tells Jeff about what he has seen and that Pete is following him. And just when he told him, Pete enters the restaurant. Sam bends over his food. Jeff responses about Sam’s story that Sam is too suspicious. Sam looks up, but with a bad timing, because Pete just walks by. Pete says: “Hey man, everything okay?” Sam looks at Pete, points with one finger shortly to Pete, but says nothing. He waits until Pete has walked by and than says to Jeff: “That’s him!” Jeff looks at Pete, who sits down two tables away, and says that Sam is paranoid. Jeff hears that Pete orders a none-junk-food-lunch and behaves cultivated. Sam: “Bastards are the best actors” and signs that, when he leaves the restaurant, he immediately will be followed by Pete. Sam drops some cash on the table, takes a last bite and stands up. As if he really wants to leave, he gives Jeff a hand. But Pete is waiting patiently on his food and looks outside. Sam: “Ooh yeah, there’s one thing I have to say…”, but uses it as excuse to sit down again. Jeff looks again to Pete and says to Sam: “You are really wrong.” Sam proposes to go to the bank (because Pete is here). At the crossing, Sam points to the traffic light that he meant. At the bank, they walk to the security room. There they talk about Sam’s ‘dilemma’. Carl, another security, sits on the other site of the room, behind some monitors. So, Sam and Jeff don’t see what Carl is doing. (He’s mailing with someone) Sam asks Jeff if there are camera’s pointed from the bank to the crossing. Jeff turns to Carl (to ask him), but he says that only the door is under surveillance (and everything inside). Later, Carl asks from behind his screens, if Jeff didn’t recognised the negro. But Jeff can’t confirm. Carl asks for some details about Pete. Sam has his doubts about involving Carl into this, but than describes Pete with some good details. Carl thinks he recognizes him and says: “That could be Pete from district 2.” Sam looks at Jeff, but Jeff also doesn’t know any Pete. After a few clicks on his keyboard, Carl asks the gentlemen to check the screen. There it stands, the complete profile of Pete. Sam recognizes him immediately and Jeff confirms. Carl says he know him from the past, he was also at district 2 for some time….
Last update: 14-06-2011 01:59
Published in : Crime


Recapitulate
(11 votes)
 
License: by-nc-sa
Written by Ste Bamber, on 24-05-2011 09:57
Views 150

It starts out as your typical police department until 2 police detectives go to a crime scene early in the morning. They see that there has been a neatly disembowelled female’s body left with pennies on her eyes. They try to identify the person using but can’t find any family or history about her. They walk down town talking about the crime and walk past a bunch of prostitutes at a corner, a women approaches them and asks, "our friend is missing can you help us?" they get to talking and figure out the dead body is their friend and a prostitute. The following a day back in the police station, a call comes through saying there has been another similar murder down town. The Detectives go down to the crime scene, and are speechless to see the freshly disembowelled body is that of the woman who told them about the 1st victim. Wondering if they’re linked and where to go from here, they head back to the station puzzled. Results from forensic tests come back with nothing to show, the criminal that they are dealing with is a mastermind. The detectives are puzzled as to who is committing these crimes. A colleague says to the detectives, "Do you guys remember that jack the ripper?" The detectives scoff and they disagree with the colleague, saying that's a ridiculous statement. The head of the police department, standing not too far away, explains to the detective that it could be a copy cat criminal, it's the 'modern day jack the ripper'. The two detectives can't believe what they’re hearing and start getting every bit of information about the original jack the ripper to help solve the case. *It then shows a woman being preyed upon and disembowelled from start to finish in the killers perspective. He feeds her grapes and seduces her, then takes her back to an abandoned building where he drugs her and starts to remove her organs. You seem him take the body to the streets and leave her there placing pennies on her eyes. Then you see the criminal washing his tools humming a cheerful song as he wipes his scalpel. * It cuts to the next day the detective watches the news while eating his breakfast. Murders of prostitutes in the town and surrounding area keep occurring and the media is referring to these string of crimes to the 'modern day jack the ripper crime fest' and doubt the police forces ability to catch him. The town starts to go into panic and the head of department makes a statement to the media reassuring they will catch this guy. The detectives know it is only a matter of time before he strikes again and warn all people to be very wary. Numerous police men watch over brothels and other areas trying to catch anything that they can. Then the guy who is imitating jack the ripper sends a note to the detective saying, "That was very stupid of you... you have my victims in a panic... this is might just be my next victim". Attached to the note is a picture of his family’s home with his wife and kids on it with a circle around his wife’s head with the words ‘whore’ wrote in capitals. The detective rushes home to find the family is ok, safe and well. He makes a cup of tea, checks his mail and goes upstairs. He goes to his room to calm down, as he enters the room he sees’s parcel with his name on it. Opening it he finds a DVD inside saying play me. He puts it in the player and it shows proof of his wife sleeping around with other men. Sickened by what he sees, He starts to get angry smashing thing up in the room and yelling at his wife. His wife comes in to see the video being played and panics. She tries to explain, but the detective won’t listen! He hits her. She walks out the room and downstairs. He sits watching the tape, getting upset. He goes downstairs to apologise to his wife, he turns into the living room and finds his wife on the couch with her body messily cut open with two pennies thrown on the floor. There's a note next to her saying "see what you've done?"Later that night, after the detective has been questioned he leaves to go to his car. Finds it’s been vandalised. As he turns is struck on the head. The detective wakes up, and the killer is staring him in the face. He says "that was a close one wasn’t it"
Last update: 24-05-2011 21:32
Published in : Crime


The Hill
(1 vote)
 
License: by-nc-sa
Written by Kwadjo Ahenkorah, on 13-05-2011 23:13
Views 57

A story about two brothers who grow up and take two completely different turns in life with one brother becoming the head of a notorious gang and the other a police sergent. The two brothers full out and serparate when they were young and do not see each other for 10 years, but when their father dies the brother are reconnected but old tenions re-appear when the brother who is a policeman moves back to his old area inorder to look after thier mother and finds out that the main criminal figure he is ordered to investigate is his brother.
Last update: 13-05-2011 23:13
Published in : Crime


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