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Written by Chris Duquette, on 11-03-2010 09:12 Kill Bill - Volume 1
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Chris is a quiet, easy going, marijuana enthusiast ; ) who is talked into joining the carnival by T.J. a southern fellow who he met through a friend (female). Growing up in Rhode Island, He never traveled cross country, and was a little nervous, but in his mind he imagined it would be a blast. Once he gets there, it's night time, everybody's hanging out, drinking, smoking, having a good time, Just as he thought.Later that night he laid on his small bunk, in his congested traveling room. Satisfied with his decision to join the carnival he slowly closed his eyes to sleep with the angels. The hour was early when a distant loud banging was heard. The ignorant ruckus was traveling closer, Then a voice was heard, along with the pounding, "Wake the f@#! up" was heard, along with, "Draws". Dreading the command to awaken, his curiosity is sparked from the word "Draw", So he walks out along with other disgruntled carnies. Slowly they form a line to receive 20 dollars, as a daily allowance. Which at the time (and still) didn't seem like a lot. The money was meant for food but it was used for whatever the person's demons required. A few joinies( which was a term for people who decide to join the carnival.) spent their money strictly on their demon. the carnies, were mostly pot heads who figured out how to escape some of their responsibilities. At the same time filling the emptiness this world provides for some. But besides the rigorous work, which they endured every tear down. A few months go by, and one day Chris's friend, Who came along with her boyfriend T.J. decides to pitch a fit and gets herself fired. So T.J. and Becky head back to Rhode Island, Leaving Chris to fend for himself. A few more weeks go by and Chris grows lonely, until one day while at the West Virginia Fair, a young runaway walks up to him asking if the carnival was hiring. With beauty and innocence in her eyes, Okay well it turns into a romantic comedy with alcohol and marijuana (oh boy!!!) They get to know each other, eventually fall in love, Once that happens, they realize that the carnival is a traveling sweatshop where they make you work days straight, With the drive between states as your only break. ANYWAYS, they move back to Rhode island, She leaves to go back home because he's still partying. She calls him pregnant, He leaves Rhode Island, and his old life style to be with her, They live happily ever after. the end. You could probably guess this is based on a true story. It could use some touches. But who knows, I'm not that big of a romantic comedy fan.
Last update: 11-03-2010 09:12
Published in : Comedy

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Posted by rcwriter, on 12-03-2010 03:21, IP 71.50.22.165, Registered
1. that's not bad
I think it's got some potential
 
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Posted by dukey bird, on 14-03-2010 11:56, IP 96.238.26.221, Registered
2. ty
Thank you, I'm living that tale. I'm glad the carnival part is over : )
 
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