Title:"Alien Spawn"
Genre:sci-fi/action
Subject:"Spawn"meet"The Predator"...the ghost of a murdered human get into the body of a super powerful undying alien,only to come to Earth to revenge his murderers...
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Drama/action/science-fiction/comedy film. Jay and Seth are best friends living in a large one storey house in a small town called Oxton, they live next door to their creepy neighbour Carl, or Creepy Carl as they call him. Jay and Seth both work at a small convenience store down the road from their house, on their day off they decide to go shopping in the city as they leave they comment "Today is gonna be a good day."
TWO HOURS LATER: Jay and Seth burst into their house carrying a bloody and screaming teenager who is carrying a pistol, as they enter the house, Jay and Seth quickly shower and get dressed and in the living room they lay the boy down and begin discussing what to do. Seth begins explaining that the zombies can only infect you if they bite you the two of them begin discussing how the boy could be infected, and he may be a risk to their lifes. The two begin discussing mistakes people make in zombie movies. Jay simply explains they need too kill him but Seth objects, the two of them get into a fight about whether or not the boy is infected but as they prepare to attack each other, the boy regains consciousness and explains to them that he is not infected the angered Jay holds him at gunpoint as the boy rambles on about how he got shot, Seth takes the gun and puts it in his pocket. They then ask the boy what happened. SECOND HOUR. The boy named Joel is working at a videostore with his friend Matty the two in the videstore begin discussing how zombie movies are a waste of time, and always end badly, they then go get a taco but as they are crossing the road two cars crash head long into each other as a man waving a bible runs by screaming "It's the apocalypse gods wrath has come down upon us!" Joel and Matty begin running but are shot at by a bloody and heavily armed army soldier who is then hit by a car, Matty and Joel make it onto a road where Matty is hit by a car and knocked to the ground, the driver a crazed women jumps out of the car screaming and asking if they are infected or not. She aims her gun at Matty who seeing a dead policemen nearby grabs their gun and aims it the women but she shoots Matty twice through the chest killing him. The woman shoots at Matty who takes cover behind a tree, the woman gets back in her car and tries to start the car but the engine dies. Joel taking the cops gun tries to get the woman to get out of the car but she opens the door and pulls her gun shooting, Joel in the chest, as Joel falls down he is about to shoot her when a car ploughs into her and destroys her car. Joel is dragged off by the man with the bible who explains god will help them. The man begins having a panic attack and collapses and he begins spitting up blood, Joel tries to crawl off but two men trip over him, the two men Jay and Seth as Joel pleas for help, feel guilty and drag him into their van. BACK AT THE HOUSE: Jay doesn't believe him but Seth does and the two get into another argument, Joel falls into unconsciousness and they presume he is dyeing, they decide to go outside and get a medical kit from the convenience store down the road. They leave Joel and go down the road where the streets are mostly abandoned aside from a few burning cars and some dead bodies. The two of them get to the convenience store and find the medical kit they run back to their house and encounter a bloody man pleading for help, the man reaches into his shirt and Jay shouts “He's got a gun!” and shoots him dead. They get back into the house where Joel is still unconscious and as they prepare to lock the doors they hear screaming and banging from outside, they open the door and Creepy Carl bursts in screaming at them, after frantic shouting is exchanged between Carl and Jay and Seth, they calm down and lock the doors letting Carl in. Jay doesn't trust Carl but Seth appears to be on Carl's side but Jay begins contemplating Carl may be infected, Seth agrees because the man is bleeding. Carl assures them otherwise and shows them outside to his car where in his boot he has an infected Scientist who was working on the disease when it broke out and infected his colleagues. Tying the scientist up they leave Carl with him as Jay and Seth go to collect supplies from the convenience store. As the scientist assures Carl he is not infected Carl says "I don't give a good fuck if you're infected or not, why? because Its not my problem, now you see I'm gonna torture you any way regardless of what you've done or who you are. I like torture it amuses me, the pain you can inflict on a human being without them dyeing, heard of Superman? You're not it, you cant fly, you cant do shit you're here with me, now I don't care if you scream or if you cry but I'm gonna torture you just for the fun of it." Carl hits him in the face with a hammer and breaks his kneecaps while dancing simultaneously to the song “Dancing in the moonlight” by Top loader, and then he cuts two of the scientists fingers off, and hits the man in the side of the face with the hammer before being shot dead by a suddenly conscious Joel, the scientist begins crying and Joel comments "Fuck." FIRST HOUR: Jay and Seth are driving along and entering the mall they buy various DVDS but before hand discuss what films they could buy criticising many classics as they do so. They exit the HMV and begin having lunch discussing why megan fox got lifted from Transformers 3, Jay tries to flirt with the girl working at the smoothie bar and then asks for free smoothies, when she says no commenting “Amaze me”, Seth and Jay persuade a man working a stall selling electronic goodies to play a mix tape Jay has with them, the mix tape is then played on the speakers and Jay and Seth begin dancing in front of everyone some other girls join in with the dancing and then Jay and Seth finishing the dance are praised by other people at the mall who clap and cheer for them. Jay then gets the smoothie girls number and two free smoothies, he and Seth then walk upstairs to a marks and Spencer's where they encounter a man who works at water stones over hearing a conversation about a girl at the HMV, Jay buts into the conversation and persuades the book store guy to go get the girl, the book store guy then runs off and Jay and Seth walk off throwing their smoothies on the floor and get in their car and leave. as they leave the mall they get shopping and drive along they are stuck in a traffic Jam, Seth strikes up a conversation with the girl in the car next to them, the girl Kate begins flirting with Seth until she drives off and her car is crushed by a lorry. Several car crashes occur and Jay and Seth drive along and their shopping falls out of the boot, including their DVDS which dearly annoys them. The duo crash into a woman aiming a gun at a boy and accidentally kill her, they jump out of their van when several army soldiers begin shooting at the crowd of panicky bystanders, Jay and Seth begin running through a town square and have to take cover when a jet flies over head and narrowly avoids smashing into a bell tower, it crashes in the street causing a massive pile up and kills several, and destroys many cars. Jay and Seth witness a man ranting on about the wrath of god get shot down by the soldiers. They make a run for it across the square and trip over the boy, they pick him up and recognising him as the boy they nearly killed when they crashed their van into the gun toting lady they pick him up and drag him to safety in their van where they drive off in a panic, and Jay begins moaning at the boy as he is bleeding in the back of the van, as they drive in a panic they crash into a man and brutally kill him by accident, they drive off and swerve down an alleyway for a bit before crashing into another shirtless man, they jump out of their van and check if he is alive, losing hope as another jet flies by they leave him there and drive off. They arrive outside the house. BACK AT THE HOUSE: Joel and the scientist strike up a conversation about their life's, the scientist explains his father died in the 9/11 attacks and he has three kids and a wife waiting for him at home in DC. The scientist explains that when he was living in New-York with his wife and kids his dad had came to visit but left after an argument with the scientist. 9/11: FLASHBACK: The scientist is eating an omelette in a coffee shop which has around five people inside. A waiter Randy confronts the scientist and recognises him as the guy with the kids who comes here all the time. Two lovestruck teens Ted and Sophie begin quizing Randy on his lovelife but he shoos them away. He explains to the scientist that this coffee shop is a haven for the loveless and the teens stick around in the hope of helping the lost in love or the "the old doggy’s without a bone." Randy begins explaining that he neglected his wife when she was around and when she wasn't around he dearly missed her. Randy explains that she came from a richer background while he came from a poorer one, and this caused him to feel as if he wasn't good enough for her which led to their break up. Randy finishes talking and stands up and has a brief conversation with his foul mouthed boss, the owner of the complex named Don. Don though shouts “Holy shit!!” Randy, Don and the scientist rush outside in time too see the plane crashing into the world trade centre buildings, fire erupts from the buildings and people begin running away and towards, people are crying and the first man jumps from the building. BACK AT THE HOUSE: Jay and Seth get back and find the dead Carl, Joel explains to them what had been happening but Jay doesn't buy it and leaves the kitchen returning with a gun from his safe which he uses to shoot the scientist dead. Seth shouts “Am I the only one having a fucking terrible day!!!”
The HMV GUYS: Lewis Bell awakens from his slumber and after making his bed and having breakfast he leaves his apartment which is opposite the Lake Blue shopping mall, as he leaves the apartment he listens to the song “To be young” By Ryan Adams before switching to 9-5 by Dolly Parton. He then enters the HMV store listening to the song and puts his backpack and I-pod, and coat into his locker near the loading bay of the store, where with his employee uniform on he heads to the till near the front of the large HMV store in which he works, where he chats casually to the girl he usually works alongside at the till named Molly, he then serves a few customers as does Molly and then Olivia, another worker at the store arrives in late and persuades the in store manager to let her off with it and Tim, the in store manager reluctantly agrees.
Olivia then arrives and begins casually chatting about the show 'Gossip Girl' with Molly and then expresses her disgust that she and Molly don't get the chance to work at the till with Drake the sexy and muscular 21 year old, who's shift begins when theirs at the till ends at 12 o'clock.
And Olivia expresses her anger that she has too work with Lewis who she refers to as “Old soppy bollocks' when she could be working with Drake.
Lewis and her then begin trading insults and Lewis gives her the finger before chatting with his friend and co-worker John who has the job of helping the customers pick something they like, they begin chatting about a film they saw the other night and then start chatting to Isaac their cocky and usually immature black friend, about the film.
Lewis is then confronted about his shift and is asked to stop working at the till at 11' am and do what John does and help the customers, as he leaves, Olivia states that Lewis is unsocial immature and an idiot and that he could never be nice to the customer.
Lewis makes a bet with her that by the end of the day he can:
1). Befriend a customer and have an actual conversation with them.
2). Get a female customers number.
3). Cause something truly majestic to happen.
Lewis and Isaac go for their lunch where Isaac meets Dave a hopeless romantic working at the bookstore Waterstone's where he is pushed around by his boss Carrey.
Lewis and Isaac head back to the book store where they meet up with Sabrina, one of their co workers who has just gone through a bad break up with a man who she only refers to as:
“shit head prick”
Lewis goes back to work in the store and chats casually to Sabrina and as he helps a customer, Dave enters the HMV and gets into an argument with Sabrina about their break up leading too a huge argument in which they both swear loudly to each other as Isaac is caught in the middle of their quarrel. Sabrina storms off as does Dave who confides in John.
John tries talking too Sabrina and reassures her that Dave really cares about her, meanwhile Lewis meets Tom an elderly man who is looking for a birthday present for his wife, he explains to Lewis and the two befriend one another, leading to Lewis recommending films for the man.
John meanwhile is working at the counter and is confronted by a young boy around the age of 6 trying to buy an 18 rated DVD but John refuses to let the boy buy it leading to the boy running off.
John shrugs it off.
Meanwhile Lewis is bonding with the elderly man Tom and as Lewis sells Tom his DVDS for his wife, Lewis crosses of number 1 on his list.
Lewis is stacking DVDS while Dave confronts Amy asking about where Sabrina is, this leads Lewis too tell Dave he knows where Sabrina, Lewis leads Dave out of the store and sits down with him at a coffee shop where the two discuss the break up situation which occurred between Sabrina and Dave leading Lewis too try and get the two back together.
As Dave mopes around the store, Lewis appears at the counter and quietly begins smiling when a song called 'Better Run' is played on the store intercom and Lewis smiles at Dave saying:
“ You know I've always liked this song, cause it reminds me of good times. My girlfriend broke up with me after 3 years so that she could run. I hope I can stop wondering if all the time we had was a waste... But I've realised that she didn't want to be with me any more and that was her choice because I've benefited from the fact that she's gone, yeah I miss her but without me she can be free she can get what she wanted and she wanted too run.
Good Charlotte the band that sung this,was there for me before her, is there for me now, and will be as long as I have ears to listen. And this song it makes me sad but that's a feeling the problem with the world today? We all just mope around we never admire life, we don't realise beauty we are a cruel desolate people, the human race are frankly horrible, but life, life isn't horrible its the people in life that make our existence so god damn shitty, but this song, it brings me out of the shit, it lifts me higher, it makes me happy it makes me sad, the problem with the world is we never stop to feel any more and we have to be so horrible we have to be so neglectful to the people around us, we have to do such evil things, maybe its just because we want to feel something again, life is like a dog chasing a car, when it finally gets the car it doesn't know what to do with it. Life is like that because when my girlfriend left me I was chasing fucking cars, so was she, probably but hell the wind surging through you, the gust of the air between your fingertips when you finally reach that car you feel something, but you don't know what to do with that feeling, what we need to do is nothing, we just need to live. We just need to feel, this song, this makes me feel, and Sabrina she makes you feel something I don't know if its love but you want her, and what you need to do is go get her because you need to go get your car. Go get em tiger, feel something.”
Dave smiles at Lewis thanking him and he is about to say something when Dave and Lewis are interrupted when Jay and Seth begin doing their dance routine in front of a large crowd.
Dave gives up and heads to Marks and Spencer's to get a snack, Isaac and Lewis follow him and confront him in the store where they meet Jay and Seth, Jay confronts Dave overhearing his moans about Sabrina, saying: “What you need to do mate is go get that girl, apologise, say your sorry take the blame because if there's one thing girls have taught it's that even when they're wrong, they're right. Listen to your friends go get that girl.” Jay and Seth leave.
Dave confronts her in the store and the two reconcile when Dave reveals all about how he feels leading Sabrina, Isaac, Lewis, Dave, and Amy to leave HMV leaving Olivia, Tim and John looking after the store.
Olivia leaves the till to stack some DVDS as John begins playing on his phone as he looks up he sees the zombie version of the 6 year old, he refused to sell the 18 rated DVD too.
The zombie then brutally kills John by smashing his head with a piece of wood.
Olivia tries to run off but a second adult zombie jumps on her and tears her throat out.
As she lies dying on the floor, Tim uses a strip of metal from a shelf to defend himself in which he kills the child zombie but is mercilessly thrown around the shop like a rag doll by the infected adult.
Lewis enters having forgot his phone, leading him and Tim too make a run for it, they notice several infected outside the store as well as many panicked bystanders who are attacking each other and looting stores.
Lewis closes the shutters outside the HMV leading the shutters to be closed locking both, Lewis and Tim inside with the zombie and the half dead Olivia.
Olivia is killed when the zombie stabs her with a piece of metal but Lewis grabbing a lap top brutally smashes the zombies head in. Lewis says a Teary goodbye to Olivia.
Lewis throws a metal shelf through the shop window allowing he and Tim too make a run for it through the chaotic mall where many un-infected people are attacking and killing each other, they head up stairs just in time too see a man being thrown off a balcony where he is impaled on a statues arm.
Lewis and Tim make a run for it and bump into two suited men.
The DUDES IN THE BLACK SUITS:
A foul mouthed generally immature FBI agent named Seth enters an office building positioned opposite a shopping mall.
As he enters the office he attends a meeting consisting of the X Team, Goldstein, Harken, Hendricks, Daley, Vaughn,Carl (Creepy Carl), Anthony, new guy Dale, and well meaning tough guy Cruise and Russell, led by the condescending, foul mouthed Spacey. Spacey tells the group that they are going to enter the mall across the road where the 'scientist' their target is going to be.
He assures them that the scientist had caused a virus infection to be released into the air which is causing wide spread panic amongst the FBI.
The team splits up into several groups consisting off Cruise, Russell, and Hendricks.
Seth and Dale in a two man group and Vaughn and Carl in a two man group, and Anthony and Jenko in a two man group.
Goldstein, Harken and Spacey stay in the office receiving regular radio updates from the groups.
Seth and Dale scout the mall while doing so they constantly bicker about life, Movies, politics-in particular the W. Bush controversies and Seth also moans continuously about being stuck with Dale aswell as criticising Dale about his sex life. They also briefly watch a segment of Jay and Seth's dance routine in the mall.
Vaughn and Carl meanwhile are bored stiff and Vaughn is frequently shocked by Carl's physcotic behaviour. Cruise, Russell and Hendricks are looking around a furniture store when they find the scientist they capture him and tie him to a chair in the shop.
As the three begin quarrelling about what to do, Vaughn and Carl appear and the debating continues. But the scientist explains he was hired to create and develop the virus which was released into a human a few hours ago in the mall by a small terrorist organisation which are intent on causing chaos and have paid the scientist a large sum of money to create the virus. Vaughn radios this to Spacey.
Spacey, Goldstein and Harken in the office are debating what to do about the imminent infection, in the office and as Harken and Spacey reach boiling point they draw guns on each other, Goldstein runs off but as Harken aims the gun at Spacey-who assures Harken they have to contain the virus in a civil manor. But Harken explains that the infected and everyone in the mall need to be eradicated.
Harken shoots Spacey twice in the chest killing him, and the Tech team in the office are shot by Harken who radios Carl and orders the 'Containment' to begin, Carl smashes the radio and tells the group of the news, Carl makes them choose sides with a small group agreeing with Carl consisting of Russell,Hendricks, Harken and Anthony, they open fire on the rest of the group killing the newly arrived Jenko and knocking Vaughn through a glass window, Vaughn how ever runs off.
Cruise runs into the office of the store and locks himself inside climbing into a ventilation shaft to escape the rogue group.
Seth and Dale however are unaware of the situation and are roaming around the shops, but are shocked when a zombie shows up, Seth shocked shoots it dead only for more to appear he makes a run for it with Dale in tow and they clamber up an escalator.
An explosion in the cinema caused by a zombie projectionist causes several deaths and wide spread panic. Dale and Seth are hanging on for dear life when the explosion partly destroys the escalator and leaves them hanging on over the zombie mass below, the two escape though and are assisted by Vaughn. A SWAT team arrives and smashing through windows shooting at the people below, begin killing not only the zombies but everyone in sight under 'no mercy' protocol by Carl's order.
Vaughn is attacked by the SWATS but he engages in a brief fire fight with them.
Drake is brutally torn too pieces by the zombies and Carey-Dave's boss is killed by the soldiers.
Sabrina, Dave, Isaac, Amy, run into the SWAT team who open fire and shoot Isaac to death,and Dave and Sabrina run off.
Cruise meanwhile in the ventilation shaft smashes open a nearby hatch which is located on a wall several floors below the bottom of the mall, Cruise climbs onto a narrow ledge and jumps onto a large inflatable snowman located below, he clambers around the side of it, and as a SWAT dangles down from the roof in a safety wire, Cruise dives and grabs the wire swinging onto the second floor where he shoots Carl in the hand, Carl however runs off with Anthony and as they arrive in the car park, Carl betrays Anthony and shoots him four times in the back before kidnapping the scientist and setting off in his car leaving the mall.
Several members of the small terrorist group appear and one of their bombs go off causing an explosion which rockets one of the car parks and causes it too violently collapses.
Harken, Russell and Hendricks abandon the SWAT team which is overcome with zombies.
Harken notices a yacht outside the mall, (mall is at sea side), they make a run for it.
Lewis and Tim run into Seth and Dale and the two rush the two outside towards the yacht followed also by Sabrina and Dave, Cruise and Vaughn are following close behind but Vaughn is violently killed by a zombie which rips his throat out. Goldstein appears and rushes onto the boat.
Lewis and Tim are running but an array of bullets cascade into Tim's leg severely injuring him, the group make it onto the boat called the 'Vamiris' only for Hendricks to fire upon the group.
The yacht is three levels high and Cruise climbing up onto it shoots Hendricks to death before killing the zombies on board and climbing onto the top off the yacht he slides downwards over the front of it rolling past the steering area where Hendricks is, Cruise stabs Russell and throws him onto the ground but Russell pulls a gun and shoots Goldstein to death before shooting Tim to death.
As Cruise and Hendricks engage in a brutal fist fight, Cruise is badly injured when he is hit repeatedly over the head with a metal pole but Lewis appears wielding a pistol and shoots Hendricks to death.
As the zombies rush towards the yacht, Cruise takes control of the yacht and sails into the distance with the only people on board being Cruise, Lewis, Dave, Sabrina, Seth, Dale and Amy.
Russell jumps up though but he is shot too death by Seth.
Lewis stares blankly at the mall as it explodes and collapses in fiery ruins, he comments
“Well that was a massive cluster fuck.”
BACK AT THE HOUSE: Joel stares in awe at the dead scientist and fuming, Joel staggers to his feet and pulls a gun on Jay and as the two square off, Seth ducks down and a man with his shirt off bursts into the house aiming two revolvers at Joel and Jay.
THE SHIRTLESS MAN: The shirtless man or "Mark" is walking down the street and he encounters Carl walking his dog, the shirtless man goes to a convenience store and looks around as the two clerks Jay and Seth begin discussing how smokers are paying to kill themselves, and the two get into an argument about lord of the rings and Mark takes a drink and leaves, he walks down the street and gets a burger at McDonalds he goes to his apartment and enjoys Movie night with his friend Jason and his room mate Charlie, they enjoy the film and go to a bar where Mark meets a beautiful girl named Megan, he falls head over heels for her, and he spends the night with her and her friend Alice, Mark initially meets her by ending up staring at her tea shirt which has a witty comment on the front, she see's him staring and comes to the conclusion he was staring at her breasts but he smooths things over with her and they bond. As the night goes on they grow closer to one another, as Charlie dances to all different assortments of music, Jason is having a beer with Alice and as she goes to the toilet, Jason strikes up a conversation with Matty (Showing the viewer that this segment of the film is in fact set the day before the initial zombie chaos.) Matty buys Jason a drink and leaves. Mark and Megan eventually go back to his apartment and have sex that night, jason sleeps on the couch and Charlie sleeps in his room, Alice on the other hand on her way out of the bar is attacked by a man covered in blood, (obviously a zombie shrouded by shadows.) but the next morning Mark finds on the news that zombies are walking the earth or certain parts of it anyway, Mark,Charlie and Jason get into a panic of what they should do with the situation and as Megan exits the bedroom with a bitemark,Charlie has basically a Spaz attack and begins throwing things at her, the trio lock her outside the apartment and Mark shares a few final words with Megan saying that he loves her. Mark hears screaming and strange noises obviously from the zombies, Mark hears what he believes to be Megan being eaten alive, there is hammering on the door and the trio manage to go down a fire exit and to the ground. They run along the street panicking but as Charlie cries he slows down and comments “I'm scared guys.”, he begins tearing up but Jay and Seth's van ploughs into him and brutally kills Charlie. Jason and Mark run along the street but Jason is shot dead by a mad man wielding a revolver, Mark kills him with a trash can bludgeoning him to death before taking his revolver and running off, his shirt is caught on a dustbin and is torn off, he runs along the street and begins shouting for help, a lorry flips over and explodes and Mark taking a moped drives off before he is hit by a van and seriously injured, the drivers Jay and Seth momentarily get out to help but drive off after a few minutes of checking the body. Mark shirtless and wielding the gun follows their van and sees them entering their house.
BACK AT THE HOUSE: Mark,Joel and Jay all aiming guns at each other begin screaming but fall silent only for the silence to be broken by a news report which shows most of the zombies have been killed but the infected remain at large and need to be eradicated. Jay screams and shoots Joel, resulting in Joel shooting Jay in the arm as he falls down dead and Mark shooting Jay before being shot by a still standing Jay who collapses. Jay begins crawling along the ground but falls dead. Seth the lone survivor stands up. As he looks around an zombified Jay stands up but Seth looking at him pauses and then shoots Jay in the head killing him.
Seth stands up and leaves.
He collapses outside the house crying as shots are shown of all the dead characters, and the group on the boat are seen sailing into the distance.
Seth lying outside his house stares up in awe as a military jet flies over head.
The jet flies into the distance and Seth noticing a small stray dog, a chihuahua, and Seth picking it up takes it into his van and drives away, he picks up a hitch hiker on the way, staring at a photo positioned on his mirror in the van, which shows both Seth and Jay in storm trooper uniforms, at 2009 comic con.
Seth smiles as he drives away through an abandoned road commenting “Well that went well.”
THE END PLEASE COMMENT. BY LEWIS BELL AGE 15.
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Murder mystery/horror/ action/ black comedy film. Gary Bowie is driving back to his apartment in the pouring rain when a freak storm hits and he crashes the car in a ditch, with great effort though he manages to drive the car back onto the road but as he continues driving a lorry nearly smashes into his car and it spins out of control he regains control of the car only to crash into a wall, he stumbles out of the car and looking around realises he is at a large hotel/ bed and breakfast/restaurant type building called the Carfraemill. Gary enters and tries to call his room mate back at the apartment but after talking with the bartender Seth, he realises the lines are all dead because of the storm. Gary befriends Seth and the two begin talking about past romantic encounters, meanwhile two men are having their dinner next to a fire place and across from Gary and Seth, their names are Jackson and Timothy, the two begin talking about how a man called Boyle killed a man named Freddy. The two begin discussing the best ways to pull of a murder, talking about theory's used in popular Movies. As they are chatting a cocky foul mouthed teenager named Lewis comes down the stairs from the third floor and orders a beer and begins playfully teasing Seth, which amuses Gary. Lewis orders some dinner and sits down reading a newspaper sipping some coffee and looking through documents on his laptop which he explains to Seth and Gary are screenplays he is selling too Quentin Tarantino, Martin Scorsese and Steven Spielberg for the 'low' price of 20 grand per screenplay, in return Lewis explains he not only gets the money but he gets an additional producer and writer credit when the film is made. Lewis befriends Gary and as the storm continues thrashing the outside of the hotel, the butler Bitterman expresses his distaste with the weather. A young women in her twenties named Rose enters the hotel and asks to use the phone only to be told by Seth that the lines are down due to the storm. Rose expresses her anger with the situation and begins declaring to everyone in the main area of the restaurant about how she is an actress and she needs to make an audition. Seth doesn't take her seriously and teases her, while Lewis befriends her and she confides in him, expressing her woes. Two women from upstairs, Kristin and Kelly enter the main area and begin talking with Seth about when the storm will die out, Seth doesn't know but Bitterman assures them the storm is due to rage on for days. Three men who work in room service, Marcus,Zack and Holden also gather in the bar area. The owner of the hotel Patrick Price assures the group that the roads will be fine in the morning to the dismay of Bitterman who doesn't believe him. The cook Marty leaves the kitchen and changes into casual clothes and enters the bar ordering a drink. Three waiters Scott, Greg and John sit on the stairs bickering about Movies and women as the storm continues. Some of the other cooking staff, Carla, Maria and the man who cleans the dishes Casey, sit in the corner at a rounded table talking about celebrities that piss them off. A lone hooded man enters the restaurant and sits down and begins drinking heavily. One of the men from upstairs named Ben comes downstairs and begins asking about the weather and the answer is the same. The lone hooded man having ordered a steak begins eating it at the bar but he begins choking and violently spews blood before falling and dying to the shock of the rest of the people, Scott stumbles against a door shocked, the lights go out and when they come on, Scott is found to be missing. Price tries to calm everyone down and ushers them into the large dining room at the bottom section of the hotel in there though as the group all take a seat, a bullet smashes through Ben's chest severely injuring him and the gunman is no where to be found causing more panic, the lights then go off. When they come on again, Price takes everyone back to the bar area, where Seth uses the first aid kit to treat Ben's wounds. As he does so the lights continue to flicker on and off, causing John, who used to be an electrician to try and adjust the settings on the power mains in the cellar as he does so he assures the group that he has to go to the roof to adjust the satellite which will cause a better signal to come about so Seth can radio for help. John uses a ladder to go to the roof, with Gary holding the ladder as John is up there though he reaches up to the satellite only for him to slip and slice his hand on the sharp edge of a statue. John again tries to reach up to the satellite but his hand burrows into a wasps nest by accident causing the wasps to violently sting him and he falls of the ladder and is brutally killed when he lands on Gary's car below. Gary rushes back inside too tell everyone of what happened Seth comes outside and finds the dead body when the two enter they pronounce that John is dead only for the lights to go off and a scream is heard, when they flash back on, Carla tries walking towards Lewis only for blood to begin bursting violently out of her neck, she dies a bloody mess and as Gary examines her body he tells the rest of them that she has had her throat slit. The bodies are placed in a corner near the bar and the group go into the dining area and after examining the area, Gary sees a gun connected to a timer placed on a shelf behind where Ben had been shot. Lewis, Rose, Timothy and Jackson begin looking around upstairs, while Gary, Seth, Bitterman and Price examine the dining room. Greg, Casey, Kristin, Maria and Kelly begin looking around the top floor of the hotel where they find a room door open, inside they find a waiter named Rob lying with his throat slashed open. They go downstairs to the bar area where they find Marty looking after the injured Ben. Lewis, Rose, Timothy and Jackson begin looking about upstairs only for Scott to dive out of a room and slash Lewis across the shoulder with a knife attacking him, Lewis tries to run but he is pushed down the stairs by Scott and he lands badly hurting his arm he tries to run off only to be beaten over the head with a coat holder, Jackson appears though and pulling a gun from his coat shoots Scott to death. Everyone blames the deaths on Jackson but Lewis vouches for Jackson and explains that at the time when Ben was shot, Jackson had been at the other side of the room, and the timed gun had shot Ben. Lewis explains it was probably Scott who murdered the people. Timothy and Jackson explain they are hit men who work for the mob killing off 'Bad Eggs' as they like to call them, who have turned against the mob or done something horrific. Seth fixes Lewis wounds and as Gary looks around the hotel he accidentally opens up a passage in the wall, the group goes inside and finds a secluded office, and Price explains it is where he goes to 'Think'. The group again begins quarrelling but as they head back to the bar, Lewis hushes them all and says: “You people don't get it do you, this fucker, this killer who ever he is, wants this to happen he wants us to wriggle and fight with each other he wants us to turn on each other. This guy is a fucking evil genius he is going to kill us off one by one, we have to stick together or this guy is going to get us he's going to make this slow for us, what we need to do is get out of here or else this killer will fuck us over, the longer we wait the more fun he has. We have guns to defend ourselves with, there's knifes in the kitchen and I don't know who this guy is but the fact is he's one of us, we have to come to terms with that and to be perfectly honest not a lot of us will get out of this alive, we are fucked basically were walking horror movie cliches, cuz this guy isn't gonna rest till the lot of us are dead. Many of you suit the role of the dumb blondes so you guys are fucked but me, I think I'll do fine, we have to stick together though if we don't we die. And never under any circumstances should we split up that's just fucking retarded.” As Lewis finishes talking the lights go off, and Timothy disappears, everyone looks around but can't find him, and as the group look upstairs they find Timothy in one of the rooms dead, having been brutally stabbed by a sword which is lodged in his chest, Gary takes Timothy's gun to protect himself and Lewis arms himself with a fire axe. The group go back to the dining room where they take a seat and have a rest, Lewis connects with Rose by sharing a fond childhood memory and Gary befriends Kristin. Rose explains she needs to go upstairs and get her suitcase from her room, Greg agrees to go with her but as they leave and begin walking up the stairs the lights go off, when they come on again Greg reaches the top of the stairs, and he is attacked by a hooded man wearing a mask who slashes his throat and brutally stabs him to death, Rose takes refuge in her room but is attacked by the man who breaks into the room and beats her, but she manages to hide in the bathroom. The group rush upstairs but as Casey steps on the stairs his step activates an automatic blade which swings out from the wall and cuts Casey in half killing him. Lewis using the axe smashes down Rose's door and breaks into the bathroom where he finds her huddled in a corner crying. After looking around her room, Gary goes downstairs and seeing Scott's dead body inside finds a tape recorder stuffed in his pocket, Gary clicks play and a metallic booming voice says: “Scott for years now, you have lived with the guilt of killing an innocent man and his children in a fatal car accident rather than face the consequences for your actions you hid and kept this from the world., you have laughed and smiled and lived your life hiding your secrets from the world, today you face fear head on, in front of you is a knife, I want you to kill Lewis with it, he is the key to your freedom on his persons are several hundred dollars, I want you to take that money and leave, complications may arise though, as victims are prone to fighting back. You are not worthy of the life you possess you must earn life, to earn this you must take the life of another, by killing Lewis, you can earn your freedom. If you do not, then the past will come back to haunt you. Hurry, time is precious.” Gary is shocked and he shows the tape to the rest of the group they are all shocked but the lights go off and a scream is heard when the lights flicker on again, Bitterman is lying dead on the floor with his head smashed in. The only survivors after Gary makes a count are, Jackson, Lewis, Seth, Rose, Gary, Kristin, Kelly, Ben,Price and Marty and Marcus, Holden, Zack and Maria. Everyone begins looking upstairs and as Jackson enters Timothy's room he becomes split up from the rest of the group, Lewis notices Jacksons absence and he and Gary armed with the gun and the axe rush into the room where Timothy's dead body is. Lewis runs in and finds Jackson examining Timothy's body, Jackson pulls a tape recorder out of Timothy's jacket and presses play, the rest of the group arrive in the room as it begins playing as such: “Taking into account that you're all at a great disadvantage being trapped here, I wonder what you will do too survive, people are so weak, ungrateful of the things they have, count your blessings because I want you all to play a game, death is the key too your escape from this prison, I want you too kill each other, the lone survivor has earned their freedom but I want you too stay here, Salvation lies within these walls, you want freedom you want to leave, but I urge you to do the opposite, safety is here but how much blood will you shed from your inmates to survive. Time is of the essence, better hurry the clock is ticking.” Zack panics and runs off he runs out of the hotel and begins running towards the nearby woodland area he keeps running and falls down an embankment breaking his ankle with great effort he pulls himself up the embankment and begins limping out of the woody area but he is attacked by a large bear which standing up on two legs slashes his face and tears his throat he tries crawling away but the bear tears him to pieces. Gary witnesses this from the car park and begins running towards the woods only for the bear to charge at him but Jackson appears and shoots the bear repeatedly it runs onto the road still charging towards the two only to be hit by an approaching car. The driver named Dennis shocked has no other choice than to wait in the hotel until the phone lines begin working again. Jackson explains to Gary that when he and Timothy had been talking about murder when Gary first arrived they had been talking about when they had killed a man named Boyle and framed it on a rogue mob member named Freddy, he grieves over Timothy's death also and is comforted by Gary. Rose and Lewis connect further and the two begin kissing but are interrupted when Kelly begins shouting and panicking she attacks Seth and takes the keys for his truck she runs out into the car park with Lewis, Jackson and Gary trying to stop her as she runs into the car park, she gets in Seth's truck only for it too explode and kill her. Several of the other cars begin exploding one by one and Lewis standing next too a car is launched into a wall and he hurts his shoulder he is dragged back into the hotel as the cars outside begin exploding. The group panics and begin arguing as Lewis sits in the corner. Ben sick of their quarrelling tries to leave through a back exit where his car is parked as he heads towards the back exit, when he opens the door an automatic shotgun behind the door fires and obliterates Ben's shoulder, he manages to dive out a window and as he heads for the car he is killed when a gas main comes loose and the extremely hot gas burns his injured shoulder and as he stumbles into the front of the hotel he is killed when an eagle statue on the roof falls and brutally crushes him. Lewis explains that they should go up stairs and rest but Gary says it is not safe, but Lewis says that people can take shifts outside the king sized bedroom, Gary refuses as does Seth and the two stay in the bar area but Lewis, Kristin, Rose, Maria and Price go up to the king sized suite. Jackson, Marty, Gary,Holden,Marcus and Seth. The group in the king sized suite rest but when Maria has her turn for guarding the room outside armed with Timothy's gun she is attacked and killed by the masked man. Gary goes up to check on them but hears shouting he opens one of the normal room doors and inside finds a waiter chained to a chair screaming for help, Gary goes into the room but activates a trip wire upon entering which closes the door behind him and a sharp jagged metal pole begins protruding from the wall Gary finds a tape recorder which says “Across from you is man a normal waiter and I want you to make a choice, leave this room or save this man the window is your exit but there are consequences for your actions, if you leave this room this man will die.” Gary tries to save the man by removing his chains Gary tries smashing the chains but fails. Gary gives up and dives out the window only for a trip wire to slash his left leg and cut him badly, the metal pole stabs the man and impales through is chest. Gary tries climbing down from the roof using the ladder but the ladder breaks and Gary falls of the back of it landing on another side of the roof, he lands badly and rolls of the roof he limps back towards the main entrance. Lewis comes downstairs looking for Maria, he cant find her and begins looking at leaflets for theatre shows only for Gary to smash his hand against the window. Lewis helps him to the bar but before this Maria's body is thrown of the roof. Lewis takes the gun and runs up the stairs where he encounters the masked man, Lewis shoots at the masked man resulting in the man stabbing Lewis in the side of the neck with a pen before kicking him out a window but he lands on an umbrella stand which breaks his fall. He is brought inside and with great difficulty Seth manages to stop the bleeding in Lewis' neck. Holden begins obsessing about the tape found in Timothy's jacket and he believes it has a secret meaning but the rest of the group ignore him. Lewis though agrees with Holden, and again talks of the Agatha Christie novel 'and then there were none' in which ten people are lured to a remote location under false pretences only to be killed of one by one, but each person had done something bad in their past and to top it off these people killed each other causing an unsolvable murder because all clues pointed to everyone, everyone being a subject and there was no reasonable explanation for the killings in the books. Holden explains that they have all done something bad before and he points the finger at Jackson explaining that he is a hit man, he also states that Bitterman was a stuck up, stubborn jerk, Zack had cheated on his girlfriends numerous times, Kelly had been selfish and abandoned her friends to save her own ass resulting in her death, Marty explains he had a criminal record for breaking into someone's house and robbing the place, Rose is a selfish actress only caring for her self, Ben had abandoned the group not listening to the line in the tape 'Salvation lies within these walls', Lewis is deemed being suitable for this punishment in the hotel because he was an Asshole, Maria had been stealing from guests-Rose explains this because she finds her missing necklace in Maria's pocket, Carla had been a racist and Casey had been to prison for the hit and run of a man, Gary connects the dots and explains that Greg's best friend died in a car accident, Lewis explains that John had died in an accident and the others had simply been murdered regardless of if they were a bad person or not and Scott had turned on Lewis trying to kill him, Holden explains he is neglectful to his friends and Marcus says he is a recovering drug addict,-the line from the tape 'People are so weak ungrateful of the things they have'- ungratefulness of life. Marty, Rose, Marcus Kristin,Jackson, Holden,Gary, Lewis, Seth, Price, Kristin and Dennis who is completely confused about the entire situation. Marcus goes into the kitchen looking for some ice cream, but he is attacked by Holden in the kitchen, the two engage in a brief brutal fight as the rest of the group are unaware of this because they are in the dining room. Holden taking a chopping axe slashes Marcus' stomach and kicks him into a fridge before brutally smashing him into a wall and stabbing him in the neck, Marcus though still fights back attacking Holden and knocking him to the ground, Marcus walks towards him but Holden springs up and kicks Marcus in the chest launching him into an open dishwasher where he is impaled on a large array of knifes sticking out of the dishwasher. Marcus dies as Holden takes several knifes and walks out of the kitchen. Holden attacks Kristin when she is upstairs and throws her through a glass window and she collapses. Holden steps over her, Lewis over hearing this goes up stairs but he is attacked by Gary and they engage in a brutal fight resulting in Lewis being thrown down the stairs. Dennis sitting at the bar is confused as to what happened with Lewis sitting upon the bar he is shocked and as Holden steps down the stairs he pulls a gun and shoots Dennis three times in the chest launching him off the bar where he dies upon hitting the ground. Price attacks Holden only to be smashed along the bar before having his hand stabbed into the ground by a knife, he screams for help alerting Jackson and Gary, who have a brief shoot out with Holden. Jackson is shot to death by Holden and Gary runs off. Seth assisted by Rose helps the injured Kristin into Jackson's car outside, Lewis having being knocked out awakens and shoots Holden in the chest knocking him to the ground. Marty confronts Holden but Holden awakens and shoots Marty to death. Lewis and Price run off and upon finding the power mains in the cellar find several intertwining passages under the ground which upon exploring them the two find they all are secret entrances into the rooms of the hotel. Lewis and Price are pursued by Holden but finding a large bathroom finds a fire poker and uses it to smash Holden over the head before slashing Holden's throat in one quick movement. Lewis and Price make their way back to the hotel way they came in but are attacked by the masked man who beheads Price and smashes Lewis repeatedly over the head with a toilet tank lid, Lewis attacks the man with a fire axe but the man smashes Lewis right foot and breaks the ankle resulting in Lewis collapsing. Seth, Kristin and Rose get in Jackson's car and drive off into the night. Gary is wandering around the hotel on his own and the power is off everywhere with only a few candles lighting his way he makes it into the bar area but he is hit over the head. Flash Back: A flash back shows Gary's back ground and that he is a perfectly normal man who is best friends with a coffee shop worker named Randy and the owner Don, but when Gary is dumped by his girlfriend Ella he snaps and kills his boss in a fit of anger by throwing him out a window. Gary is pursued by the police resulting in a brief car chase with the cops, but Gary retrieving a gun shoots the cops to death only to reverse of a large hill and crash his car he goes on the run and meets with a doctor but Gary kills the man and takes his car driving off but when he returns to his apartment he finds a letter Adressed to him telling him to go the Cafraemill hotel, Gary sees this an opportunity to escape the cops but he crashes his car when he arrives. Present Day: Lewis with his right foot crushed limps into the bar where he sees Gary staring blankly at him but Gary collapses with an axe in his back.Bitterman steps out of the shadows and explains he was the killer all along taking revenge on his workmates and employer, Price who tease him constantly, several flash backs show Bitterman killing his victims and attacking Lewis. Bitterman explains he not only stole Lewis' briefcase of money from his room but he assures Lewis he is intending to assume Lewis' identity and take credit for the screenplays.Lewis pulls a knife and tries to attack Bitterman but Bitterman shoots Lewis in the chest. Lewis collapses on the ground and screams in agony and despair as Bitterman closes the hotel door trapping the screaming Lewis inside. The end please comment this took me ages. By lewis bell age 15.
based on the seaqal to the the comic book that kman2 made from sean014 and the kman2 show Night watcher reaturns a hero that who stays in the darkness rated P-G 13 (2013)
